Reviews For The Elements
Reviewer: Basscop69 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2021 02:14 am Title: Earth XVI
Date: February 21, 2021 02:14 am Title: Earth XVI
I love the stone/avalanche imagery here, and the sense of Dwight’s grief and Jim’s feelings for Pam being so heavy and suffocating. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you, I enjoy so much that you enjoyed this story :)
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2021 06:01 pm Title: Earth XVI
Date: February 19, 2021 06:01 pm Title: Earth XVI
Great look into Jim's head here. While Jim and Dwight, especially early on, are almost always at odds with each other, underneath that there is a respect for each other. That comes through here. Likewise his need to go see Pam and reconfirm their relationship as he does. Great job as always.
Author's Response: Thank you, Warrior! I wish there were more Jim and Dwight's moments like this one in the show.
Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2021 10:06 am Title: Earth XVI
Date: February 19, 2021 10:06 am Title: Earth XVI
I love the avalanche metaphor here!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!