Reviews For The Elements
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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2021 10:27 am Title: Air XVI

I love this, seeing what they would've been like behind closed doors.

Author's Response: Thank you! There were a lot of moments when they were vulnerable and support each other, but, apparently, not enough for me :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2021 05:58 pm Title: Air XVI

Loved this one. That Jim has learned to not keep things in is a great way to show his growth.

Author's Response: Thank you, Warrior! Yes, I like to watch how the characters are growing, and Jim changed into a more mature person for sure. 

Reviewer: Basscop69 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2021 01:49 pm Title: Air XVI

This is some very sweet angst - I feel like it's very in character for Jim to play happy music when he's trying to convince himself he's ok, and I love Pam seeing through that. And I love the acknowledgment from Jim at the end that the price of silence is too high, after everything they've been through.

Author's Response: Oh yes, after years of silence (and consequences of it), I think they've learned that lesson and share their doubt as worries with each other. I'm glad so much you appreciated that moment too!

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