Reviews For The Elements
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Reviewer: Trish Tinkerbell Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2021 11:29 am Title: Bonus I

This is a nice one. I wonder how many times Pam felt the regret and bit of resentment towards her fate, why she didn’t meet this amazing guy earlier in life.

Reviewer: Trish Tinkerbell Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2021 10:58 am Title: Bonus I

This is a nice one. I wonder how many times Pam felt the regret and bit of resentment towards her fate, why she didn’t meet this amazing guy earlier in life.

Author's Response: Thank you! I guess she had her regrets about the wrong timing, especially on the contrast with her life with Roy... 

Reviewer: Basscop69 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02, 2021 03:48 am Title: Bonus I

Gah I loved this! The idea of Pam wishing they'd met in high school, and Pam's fate being sealed, is so bittersweet. It's a really nice touch to what is already one of my favourite scenes.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I both like it and not so much (I just don't want them to break up like so many other school sweethearts!), and I'm glad that you enjoyed this piece :)

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2021 10:54 am Title: Bonus I

I *love* the idea of a romance between high school Jim and high school Pam... and the idea of Pam thinking of her fate as already being sealed at this point sounds about right.

Author's Response: Thank you! I like the idea of this romance too, but I dread it too — people at this age usually are not ready for serious relationships and JAM breaking up is one of the worse things in the universe to me... 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2021 08:52 am Title: Bonus I

Awww, look at Pam falling even harder for Jim here. This feels like that even back then her heart knew what it wanted but her head wasn't allowing her to really feel her true feelings. Nice work.

Author's Response: Thank you! I believe that Pam thought that it was too late to change anything after ten years of relationship — even if she had her doubts. Luckily for everyone, she took a leap of faith :)

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