Date: March 02, 2021 04:01 am Title: Bonus II
This is a really great characterisation of Pam's relationship with Roy, especially the many small things dripping away rather than any big thing.
Author's Response: Thank you! Perhaps, it was for the best this way, more peaceful... though it was much harder to explain where love had gone...
Date: March 01, 2021 07:01 pm Title: Bonus II
The last line is heartbreaking.
Good onya
Author's Response: Thank you, Once, I truly appreciate it!
Date: March 01, 2021 11:01 am Title: Bonus II
Oof, really feel for her there. Just covering up the holes and cracks that have left things untenable. That her heart is now empty based on this fits so well. Going to take some more work but the good thing is she'll get there.
Author's Response: Thank you! I think that she tried her best to make things work between her and Roy, but if the only one worked... the love was doomed to run short.
Date: March 01, 2021 10:59 am Title: Bonus II
This is a really strong metaphor for the way Pam falls out of love with Roy... not big moments but just dripping away... I like it a lot.
Author's Response: Thank you!! This is the piece that especially dear to me, and I'm glad you like it too.