Reviews For The Elements
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Reviewer: Basscop69 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2021 03:47 am Title: Bonus IV

This is so heart-breaking! But so good.

Author's Response: Sorry for heartbreak, but thank you! 

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2021 09:42 pm Title: Bonus IV

Ugh. You are a POET.

Author's Response: Awww! I still can't rhyme, but THANK YOU!

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2021 10:36 am Title: Bonus IV

Just got all caught up on these and I have to say I love them all. If I had a pick a favorite I don’t know if I could! You have such a beautiful way of writing and I am so impressed with how you convey so much emotion and tell a story in just 55 words. Fantastic job, my friend!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much, BT! I'm happy you enjoyed these stories, and I'm happy I started this thing in the first place (though I think I probably threw a pack of spoilers for half of my future stories here, haha). 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2021 09:23 am Title: Bonus IV

You can tell just how much she's hoping for something, anything from him here. Which really drives home that beautiful smile of hers when he finally accepts her gift. For those brief moments, they're Jim and Pam again. That even if it doesn't last long, they're the best friends they used to be. Nice job being able to bring that out.

Author's Response: Thank you, Warrior! I think that at that point, she wanted him to reach out to her even without romantic intention, and I'm glad I was able to show that. 

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