Date: March 06, 2021 03:52 am Title: Bonus V
Aw, this was very sweet - I really like the use of ticking clock, and Pam with her brave smile and heavy heart :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I like to think that there's something brave about long-distance relationships, and, of course, Pam and Jim were strong enough to endure that.
Date: March 05, 2021 09:56 pm Title: Bonus V
You did a really good job of capturing in relatively short order what this separation would have been like for Pam, in her unfamiliar world, living with Jim at an arm's length.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad I succeeded here :)
Date: March 04, 2021 11:46 am Title: Bonus V
From longing glances to cherishing every moment together. Great way to see how her perspective changes. Really liked this one.
Author's Response: Thank you! I guess that dating (but at a distance) is much better than sharing the same space without the possibility of being together :)