Date: March 10, 2021 07:24 pm Title: Bonus VII
That is a lovely image and metaphor there, as well as a very original one. A perfect button to put on the end of this journey!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you share this journey with me :)
Date: March 07, 2021 12:09 pm Title: Bonus VII
A beautiful ending to a wondrous journey! This is quite an accomplishment and you should be very proud, Dernhelm.
Author's Response: Thank you, Bored! I'm used to criticizing my own works, but I really like how this one turned out :)
Date: March 06, 2021 08:19 pm Title: Bonus VII
Beautiful. Loved that she saw his love for her come through just as much now, when reading the note as he did way back when, when he wrote it. Jim giving her that card is one of my favorite scenes in the show and you did it justice here.
Again, you did such a great job getting into ever aspect of their relationship through this whole story. It was great to come on this journey with you. Bravo.
Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat
Author's Response: Thank you, Warrior, I'm glad you liked the final chapter! And I'm grateful to you for sticking with this story from the beginning and till the very end. And for all your lovely reviews!
Date: March 06, 2021 01:21 pm Title: Bonus VII
This was the perfect ending!
Author's Response: Thank you <333