1 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2022 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 2 - What was the question ?
I love this so far. I have always liked that Pam and Jim knew each other so well. Watching his back to see how he responds to others. The longing for each other’s company. Love love love.
1 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2021 12:14 am Title: Chapter 2 - What was the question ?
Pam's excitement to be in this moment with Jim is palpable. After a very long year fill with to this point some of the hardest growth she's ever gone through, the timing is right and she and Jim are really and truly about to start out on a path completely together. She didn't have to put on extra make-up, wear a special outfit, or anything like that. She just lived up to her own potential and was the same silly, down-to-earth, beautifully simple Pam he fell in love with.
The prize is the real Jim is finally back and he's hers. Loved it. Onto the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review, as always. Yeah I could only imagine that year long yearning can fill you up with so much emotions. I am totally on in with you that she doesn't need anything different because he fell for her dorky self before anything else. Looking forward to your feedback on future chapters.
1 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2021 10:59 am Title: Chapter 2 - What was the question ?
True fact: Jim and Karen would've lasted one week maximum if Jim had been at his old desk. And Pam knows it.
Author's Response: Yeah I guess Jim would have a hard time ignoring Pam then, especially with the amount of time she invested staring at him. Karen definitely would have had it harder, not understanding what's happening with two weirdly familiar strangers. Guess it all worked out.
1 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2021 10:59 am Title: Chapter 2 - What was the question ?
True fact: Jim and Karen would've lasted one week maximum if Jim had been at his old desk. And Pam knows it.
Author's Response: Yeah I have to say that I agree with that. Old habits die hard, especially the ones cultivated over years filled with flirting and jellybeans a86;a039;
1 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2021 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 2 - What was the question ?
This is really sweet! I'm not sure I can ever read enough about Jim finally coming back properly and them getting together, and there are some really nice touches in this - Pam reading all the subtle changes in the back of Jim's neck, Michael's confusion over a veterinarian (lol), and just Pam's whole excitement in this chapter. Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Thank you. You are really generous with your words.
I am extremely touched that you took out time to read and review my work, especially since you noticed little things I did with my characters and their thoughts.
And coming from a gifted writer like you, can’t ask for more :)
1 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2021 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 2 - What was the question ?
Great way to get into Pam's mindset here. The only thing she can think about is him and how the finally have the timing right. A brief journey back down memory lane to times of angst, but that pales in comparison to the high she's riding. Very much felt like the rest of the day passed in a flash while she was watching Jim. Loved that even staring at his back, she's got his feelings and moods down pat. Clearly she is still very in tune with him and that's great to see.
A couple typos here and there, but nothing that makes it so you don't know what you're talking about so not really a bit deal.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your feedback.
yeah I am still working on getting the format right and the typos too.
And thank you for reflecting back on my chapter, how it was more towards the excitement of Pam than the agony. You were so spot on in stating that her current focus was just Jim at the moment. Your review made me feel like I am able to deliver at least some of what I had in mind. Thank you again:)
keep showering your love. It’s really helping my confidence.
Date: February 25, 2021 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 2 - What was the question ?
I always was felt that there were two Jim’s.
Stamford Jim and Scranton Jim.
Karen was with Stamford Jim.
That Jim was cold, heartless and pretentious.
Scranton Jim was the guy that Pam loved,
and who was friends with those in the office.
So I believe that when Pam thinks that Jim is back, and Michael said the same thing,
it’s Scranton Jim they are referring to.
Author's Response: Spot on ! My thoughts were the same. How Jim didn’t have the same warmth and goofiness of years prior. Something was definitely amiss.