1 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2021 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 3 - This is it..or is it?
I love the notes of Dwight trying to recover his lost authority here, and Kevin being physically unable to restrain himself from referencing "The List" in front of Pam.
And I thought them finally texting again, and that leading Pam to go through their old texts felt like a very realistic detail and a good way of looking at their history.
Re: formatting. I usually just save the text as an html file and upload it like that - preserves the formatting.
Author's Response:
Thank you for catching those little things. Yeah i thought Kevin is not one of the subtle guy. I think his biggest accomplishment was Oscar Angela and senator scandal. And well he didn't really anything here too so I guess I have to give him some credit. I am so glad you liked my text trail part. I tried to imagine in what I used to do ...in my dating days...well past the drama now but well it used to be fun :D
Thank you for the tip. I am gonna try it in future chapters.
Date: May 29, 2021 12:21 am Title: Chapter 3 - This is it..or is it?
So I went to read this chapter and wrote those last two reviews without remembering I'd already reviewed those chapter. I'm sure you're really upset about getting more reviews.
Anyway, again a good look into her mindset. The scroll through previous texts would yeah trigger some memories. Especially if one of the last one's was the unanswered text after Diwalli. However she's in a better mental place now. And also Jim does text her back. It's delightful to see how such a seemingly simple thing could improve her mood so much. Nice job.
Can't wait to see your version of their date.
Author's Response:
Oh Not at all. I am glad you reviewed my chapters again. More the merrier. :)
Thank you for saying that about the text thing. I thought a lot about how to get the text thing simple yet meaningful, your words helped me feel so pleased that it did get through somewhere in my chapter. Keep the love coming :)