Date: September 09, 2021 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Something New Something Old
Nice work here. There's still a lot of unresolved tension that's for sure. The signs of Karen's presence for example. However the subtext of Jim wanting to be back to who he really is was great to read.
I get that it's a little hard for them to get their footing again. It's been a hard year for both and their relationship has been strained. Makes sense that it'll take some time to get back to where they once were. However it also looks like they've got all the time in the world for it too.
Author's Response: Thank you warrior4. You are so wonderful and amazing. You ensure that you give me feedback on every chapter I post and I am grateful for that.
Date: September 09, 2021 11:31 am Title: Chapter 6 - Something New Something Old
I love Pam and Jim being confronted with the way Karen has left her mark on his space and how they continue to dance around it while also addressing it... and the callback to the driving lessons is a nice touch!
Author's Response: Thank you for picking up on that part. I really worked on the ways to keep Karen present in their bubble despite her being not there physically. Jim was dating her for months, she was more than a means to their happy ending. And they both has to acknowledge that their reluctance, confusion and cowardice has caused more hurt than they experienced.