1 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2022 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 9 Secrets of Heart
I really enjoyed reading this story!
Date: February 22, 2022 08:03 am Title: Chapter 9 Secrets of Heart
"How would it feel if a Vice President is walking the branch, acting like a vampire, ready to suck blood out of their top salesman." This made me very much want to see what pranks corporate Jim would've pulled.
For the record: I say keep going with this. Writing muscles are like any other, they get stronger with exercise, and I'd be interested to see what you come up with either way!
Date: February 21, 2022 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 9 Secrets of Heart
This does feel like it could be an ending point for this story, however it also feels like they still have so much more to unpack. Pam is flush with Fancy New Beesly energy and Jim is finally being honest with himself and with her. Though it also feels like he's still holding back a bit here. I would love to read how they continue to open up to each other. Jim may have loathed the all-night conversations Karen put him through. I get the feeling his thoughts would be different with Pam. The woman he really wants to be with.
All that being said I'm glad they are having these conversations. As much fun as jumping right into the lovey dovey stuff is, to really heal the wounds of their past, they would need a lot of heart to heart conversations like this. You're doing a great job at writing them too.
It does feel like they're in a really good space here so that's a lot of fun to read. Very much feels like Jim has listened to her and he's back. Not just physically, but emotionally as well. Nice work.