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Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2022 07:00 am Title: Chapter 41

I really like this chapter. Yes Pam is in a good place, which is wonderful. But what's so great about it is that it really feels like she's grown into the woman who realizes that this is what life should be like. That she can be her own person, pursue her dreams and passion in art, make friends, and have a wonderful boyfriend who is there to support her simply to support her, not because he's expecting anything in return.

Great to see her get to this point in her life. Also, always great to see you're not dead too.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am really glad the character growth I was going for is showing through! Pam deserves nice things. I hope you like our ending chapters!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2022 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 41

HE LIVES. You are very welcome, and can repay us by starting your next story promptly after wrapping this one up.

It's nice to see Pam arrived at a good place here. It's been a bit of a journey, but she's rediscovered her people, and maybe a little bit of herself too. "It was, frankly, something she’d always wanted deep down inside and never let herself admit she wanted, because it had seemed so unlikely she’d ever get it" is a lovely line from this side of the ravine. "Being happy was all it was cracked up to be" is too.

Author's Response:

I'll do my best...I am currently working on about six different writing projects (not including fanfic) at once, so either I will get inspired and ditch them all for fanfic or it may be a while until I start another WIP. We'll see.

 

Glad you liked Pam's character growth! It's important to me with all the background hints of how bad I made her and Roy's relationship that she gets to be in a good place when this ends. 

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