1 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2021 08:13 pm Title: PDA
I love this game. This is very them, very much their humor now with the sex no longer having to remain just under the surface. The playfulness of it is perfect. And the connection with the scorekeeping in The Fight is a lovely use of flashbacks.
You've got Angela and Kevin's voices down here. Angela would discover new strange things to get upset about. (Also, thank you for having Jim drop the standard description of FNL.)
Funny, I also just read Maxine Abbott's latest, which ALSO gives a backstory to the kiss. I love it when that happens.
HE LITERALLY GOT UNDER THE DESK. You slay me.
The ending is deeply adorable.
1 [Report This]Date: April 20, 2021 06:53 pm Title: PDA
I was just wishing there were more fics with Jam sneaking around the office that summer! I love the balance of humor and fluff,thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!
Date: April 20, 2021 05:17 pm Title: PDA
This one was super cute. Loved that they were in the middle of a game there when they were outed to the office. Seems very sweet and absolutly something they would do. The flashback served as a nice counterpoint. Pam's right, there had been feelings on both of there parts for a long time before Casino Night.
The scene with Jim under her desk and Kevin and Oscar in front of her desk was positivly sinful. If there's one thing they can count on it's Micheal making a scene that's usually bigger than anything else going on.
Nice work.
1 [Report This]Date: April 20, 2021 04:31 pm Title: PDA
I don't know how you just get more and more amazing at this. I mean:
Receptionitis15> Thanks. Is this your idea of sexting?
JIM9334> No. This is me controlling myself.
I'M DYING OVER HERE.
Your Angela was also really good. The solitary "No." made me LOL.