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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2021 11:12 pm Title: Satan's Anus

Uh oh. I see this getting out of control VERY rapidly. And also possibly involving someone getting genuinely injured, which feels like it was more of a risk with some of Jim's pranks than the show acknowledged?

This is VERY solid Michael dialogue, by the way - and the Jim and Pam banter feels right.

Author's Response:

Michael can be very colorful, can't he?  ;)

  And thank you!



Author's Response:

Michael can be very colorful, can't he?  ;)

  And thank you!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2021 05:02 am Title: Satan's Anus

Now pulling Toby into this. Looks like Jim is still in reletivly good humor and Pam is firing back too. Though I'm getting more and more curious as to how Jim found himself in this situation. Nice job to build tension like that. Good Michael voice too.

Author's Response: So glad it's working for you, thank you!

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