It's getting somewhat hard to keep track of what's going on and what's being said with the constant intturptions in the dialoge. Not that the techinque is bad off hand, but for some reason in this chapter it felt like a bit much. But it's your story.

Pam as the voice of wisdom makes a lot of sense here. With her better relationship with Dwight I can see why she'd be a bit more hesitant. Nice call with that one.

Author's Response: I really appreciate your honest input here. Thank you.  :)