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Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2021 07:32 pm Title: Sleeping

MY. FEELS.

Alyssa, you're putting me in my feels!

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2021 07:56 pm Title: Sleeping

Good treatment of a classic moment. I think you did it Justice which is hard!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2021 05:55 am Title: Sleeping

To get Jim's thoughts for this moment is a treasure. It's one of the classic JAM moments and you did it proud. How much he want her to just stay there forever but knowing she can't. At the same time knowing he'll treasure this moment forever. All of it wrapped up in this brief but touching chapter really well.

Reviewer: Basscop69 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 04, 2021 06:36 am Title: Sleeping

You wrote this moment so beautifully 😍 Him trying to savour it, and then prolong it just by a second - and then instinctively protecting her - it's so, so good.

Reviewer: grc73 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2021 10:35 pm Title: Sleeping

Awwwww, this was so sweet. You’ve captured it so beautifully.

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2021 11:16 am Title: Sleeping

WOW. You did this beautiful moment such justice. Flangst to the max, baby.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2021 09:56 am Title: Sleeping

This is such a sweet moment and I want all the fic about it. ALL THE FIC.

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