Date: August 26, 2022 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Wearing Blue
I could listen to Kelly Clarkson sing from a telephone directory and I’d still be happy. Absolutely love her. Sarah Bareilles too (see previous chapter). Anyway, look at the end of that chapter- ooooooh! Finally!
Author's Response: Yup - and I've still got lots to get to so I'll say thanks a bunch and get back to it.
Date: August 24, 2022 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Wearing Blue
So Past Pam is off to get Future Michael. Past Michael is jazzed up about the site for the cafe-disco. Future Pam now has the Time Turner that sent them all on this crazy adventure. Randall has sent his team off on a bit of a wild goose chase to ensure that everyone who needs to stays apart. And Jim is probably getting the shock of his life right now. I hope I didn't miss anything there.
Getting closer and closer to seeing how it all plays out. One thing that does strike me is just before Jim comes back Future Pam is quite sure she needs just a little more time. Yet when she seems Jim again, and he tells her once more the yogurt is expired and that he notices the outfit change, it feels like the right time has finally come at last. Feels kind of circular in that way, which I'm not complaining about in the slightest.
As always can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
And I can't wait to bring it so I'll be brief - thank you as always!
Date: August 24, 2022 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Wearing Blue
Randall. Saving. The. Damn. Day. Love it.
This description of Michael's car is fun. "If Michael thought a lake cruise was a good idea in early January, he may have also hit the beach on an unseasonably warm day in December." Write THAT fic.
Lol. The chewed seatbelt. And nice to see a nice moment between OG Pam and New Michael.
THE NOTE FROM JIM. Too sweet. Ugh. I am very nervous as to how the next steps will proceed.
And I love that Michael's first thought upon seeing that room is ALWAYS a cafe disco.
THIS SCENE IN THE KITCHEN. THE CALLBACKS. THE KISS. I AM OVERWHELMED.
Author's Response: In lieu of a lengthy response I'll be working on next chapter but as always thank you!
Date: August 24, 2022 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Wearing Blue
AAAHHHHH!!! What a great kiss! I love it! And the impetus for Pam to say "fuck it" and go for it being Jim noticing a detail about her (well, two in a row) was perfection.
Also enjoyed the OL reference to Michael's gnawed seatbelt.
Can't wait to see how you bring this home!
Author's Response: So I'm going to be brief so I can get back to bringing this home- thank you!
Date: August 24, 2022 11:56 am Title: Chapter 32 - Wearing Blue
Well. What an ending!! 😬😬😬
Loved the reference to Michael chewing his seatbelt. Nice touch!!
Looking forward to the next chapter!!
Author's Response: In the interest of getting to the next chapter, I'll be brief....THANKS a lot.
Date: August 24, 2022 11:56 am Title: Chapter 32 - Wearing Blue
Well. What an ending!! 😬😬😬
Loved the reference to Michael chewing his seatbelt. Nice touch!!
Looking forward to the next chapter!!