1 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2022 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 33 Caught in a Kiss/ The Bells of Dunder Mifflin
Ok, big chapter here for sure. Loved getting into Pam's thoughts with the kiss. How time seemed to stop and all was right with the world. Also that she not only trusted Jim with what's happened with her, but that he was so ready to believe her. Now granted he's probably in a daze with the fact that a seemingly ordinary comment elicited that reaction from her, so he's to some degree ready to go along with anything she says. But it's also Jim, who just about always has Pam's back when it comes to things. So no real surprise he's right there with her. Loved that. Though with Kelly having seen what happened, I'm sure that won't bode well. Some things you can control and others you can't. One thing no one has been able to control is Kelly not sharing the latest gossip.
Roy's section was also quite interesting. Clearly he's feeling the hurt of losing Pam. No real big, break the mirror kind of reaction here though. Being at work might have something to do with that. However he is actually using his head for once. Trying to calm down before he does something rash.
Kind of a fun moment with Past Pam in the car. Her making the connection to Michael stalling and Jim trying to drag out driving lessons shows Past Pam is growing past the live in denial person she has been. With Past Pam though it still feels like the revelations are more subtle. She's not really actively thinking about them, but the puzzle pieces are falling into place and she's getting a much clearer picture of everything that's going on in her life. Then with the second Past Pam section the really important piece clicks in and she at last realizes who she's actually in love with. Nice way to bring that about.
And now Future Pam is REALLY going for what she wants. The hell with anyone else. She's going to reach out for her happiness for herself for as long as she can. Well done Pam on getting to that point. Though of course it can't happen without a major twist. Roy seeing them kiss with his current emotional state? Hoo boy! Feels like there's some fireworks coming. Great job.
Date: August 29, 2022 11:40 am Title: Chapter 33 Caught in a Kiss/ The Bells of Dunder Mifflin
THE BELL! That was so perfect!
*This transformation she could sense happening was not because of time travel or any other magic.
Except maybe it was and that magic was Jim. That magic was love.*
And this, ladies and gents, is the thesis statement of this fic.
*“Some things you just don’t question, Pam. Whatever magic or supernatural phenomenon it was to bring you to me, I’ll believe. You say you time traveled; I one-hundred percent buy it if it means you want to be with me.”
“Do you really believe me, Jim?” Her voice was pleading, her eyes solemn but hopeful.
“Absolutely, I do. Not only do I believe you but I think I must have been a time traveler too because, Pam, I’m in love with you and I have been forever, I think before I even met you.”*
Dawww! My heart!
*The more he talked the more her concern grew that he was having a mental breakdown or he was high on something the new delivery guy convinced him would be fun to smoke or take.*
Love this reference!
*“Did you not hear what Kelly said, Pam and Jim kissed?!?”
“The only kissing I care about is kissing this day goodbye and starting my weekend, now get out of my way Michael!”
Things got a little heated after that.
“No, you have to stay and be witness to the family drama.”
“I do not and I will not!”*
This is perfect Stanley dialogue.
Love the climactic feel of this chapter, leading up towards the end. Everyone knows now (even Roy!!!) so OMG WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN. Also aren't there now two Michaels in the office? I am scared.
Date: August 28, 2022 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 33 Caught in a Kiss/ The Bells of Dunder Mifflin
The references to time shifting and stopping and starting during the kiss are a nice touch, and the apparition detail is neat. The magic is love is very Harry Potter appropriate!
"Anyone could walk in at any moment, including another Pam, as she herself was highly aware of." Jim says write that fic.
"You say you time traveled; I one-hundred percent buy it if it means you want to be with me.” HEART EYES.
"He still didn’t understand the fascination with the art thing, but maybe he should have pretended to be more interested and supportive." Oh, Roy. As usual, I think you did well in locating Roy as more immature and selfish than malevolent.
Again, we see Michael's advantage as time travel partner - too bizarre normally for his bizarre behavior to tip people off. Although he gives us his best shot here.
DAMMIT KELLY. I said "oh no" multiple times reading this.
The Boy Scout story is so Michael.
While as you know I was on board with "Stanley knows and just doesn't care," I do like "Stanley is too mad at Michael wasting his time to notice there are two of them."
"“As your boss, I insist we go up the back way. And as your friend, I’ll grant you two more vacation days if you do.” The good old Michael two step!
"And just like he did back on the boat when he noticed Halpert getting a little too close to her, he would have to make it in front of all of her co-workers." You're a douche, Roy.
OH NOOOOOOOOOOO.