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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2022 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 38 - Hints and Clues

Hey, if you can solve a writing problem in appropriately symbolic ways, good on you says I.

For the record, I assumed Angela just thought that Kelly and Ryan were hooking up long before they were. That seems in character for her.

"She should have plenty of patience, and to that I say even an angel has her limits." Reasonable point. And Michael would absolutely be capable of trying the patience of an angel.

"Thanks for the line, DJC." D'awww!

"also one I think even young people today still know" Geez, I hope so. I also got curious and went to wikipedia while reading this chapter, and apparently Oh What A Night was originally set in 1933, and was supposed to be about the end of Prohibition. Which. Yikes.

"not all Superfan content is canon (unless it works with my story" I support this contention.

"Gabby seems to have a lot of prior knowledge about Pam and her relationships and about things that hadn't happened yet." BECAUSE SHE'S AN ANGEL. THAT MAKES SO MUCH SENSE.

"So, who caught the little foreshadowing to Jim's high blood pressure issues, tied in with the nod to buying Cup of Noodles for Kevin together?" HA. Fun.

Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting on my commentary. 

Yeah, no I goofed -and it was big one. But all fixed now..hope you enjoyed the rewrite.

Thanks again for the review and supporting my craziness always.

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