"I agree with Michael too, there ought to be an ex, as in ex-fianc?." Lol.

You do quite well with writing Michael and Pam, and I really enjoyed seeing both the front-of-stage and behind-the-scenes ways it came together.

"ever since, he began his work day with rolled up sleeves ready to go to war with the machine alongside her when it revolted" - write THIS fic.

"One thing that might have gone unnoticed was how Pam’s grumbling stomach seems to quiet when she’s around Jim." Awwww.

Honestly, I would've forgiven Pam for still not noticing the change. She's got a lot on her mind. So this works for me.

"I did struggle with having Jim believe so easily. We know canonically he is not the type to truly believe in ghosts or other supernatural. But Pam is kissing him and he is just so blown away at what is happening he will accept almost anything." I can accept this explanation.

", I felt it was more appropriate for her to drive a Focus – with her new perfect eyesight and focus on the future." Now THAT's detail work.

All credit goes to Ingrid Michaelson.

Thank YOU for letting us peak behind the curtain on this one! Looking forward to seeing what you come up with next, friend.

Author's Response:

Thank YOU for coming along and being so invested in it. Even in my moments of struggle, this one was a thrill to bring to life and just as thrilling was seeing what you thought after each chapter posted (including these notes).

Thank you for being such a fan and friend.