8 [Report This]Date: April 26, 2010 03:12 pm Title: The Return
Hmmm. Very interesting concept. Is there any more to it?
8 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2006 02:11 pm Title: The Return
Can't wait for more and to see where it goes.
Date: November 11, 2006 07:40 am Title: The Return
It's Stamford, not Stanford
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2006 11:06 am Title: The Return
eeek i loved it.
mostly because i know Jim needs a mega quick rebound relationship (with Karen obviously) before Pam gets mega jealous and takes him back.
But that was really perfect- you really portrayed the characters perfectly. I loved it :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2006 10:54 am Title: The Return
Definately continue! The chapter ended much too soon for my liking, so I hope you update soon :) I'm dying to see their reunion
6 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2006 08:29 am Title: The Return
I like the Pam/Dwight interaction at the beginning of this. It's a good start!
Date: November 10, 2006 05:25 am Title: The Return
Hannah, I think this is a good start, but I noticed a couple things. 1) I assume you must have written this before seeing Branch Closing, because Karen made it pretty clear that she didn't know what Jim's feelings for her were, which would imply that they probably weren't dating before that episode. I think you could just as easily make this work one of two ways: they could either be going to Scranton being VERY good friends (maybe Jim is thinking about dating Karen, unsure of what to think about Pam), or maybe they could have started dating unexpectedly in the week or couple weeks between the branch closing and the merger. I would imagine it would take some time for things to switch over, and maybe something happens between them that kind of puts them in a dating category. Given Jim's reluctance to come back to Scranton in "BC," I would not say that's unlikely.
Second, I think you might want to either run a spell-check or get a beta -- I noticed you misspelled "Stamford" several times. FYI.
Other than that ... I think you have a good start. I'm definitely curious about what's going to happen next week and beyond! I'd like to see you continue.