1 [Report This]Date: February 03, 2022 07:16 pm Title: An Introduction
This is a Cupid that I'd love to have drinks with, maybe slip a sparrow or two in my pocket.
The way you slip canon in, fill in their backstories, tug at the heartstrings and make it all hilarious is brilliant.
1 [Report This]Date: February 02, 2022 06:51 pm Title: An Introduction
Well, this is adorable. And I’m kind of in love with Cupid? He must have sent me a sparrow.
1 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2022 06:28 pm Title: An Introduction
This is such a fun idea in the run up to Valentine's Day. Really like the voice you've given Cupid here. Also the history and classical nerd side of me really loves how you've made the distinction between Cupid and Eros. Nice work there. I'll bet Dunder-Mifflin kept Cupid busy for years with everything that happened there. Looking forward to getting into this one.
1 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2022 11:06 am Title: An Introduction
Lol, WW I love this so far! It's funny that he knows Creed, I wonder *why* they spent a lot of time together in the 70s? Hmmmm... regardless, I love how you set this up! Great work, I'm super excited to see who Cupid's first victim is!
Date: February 01, 2022 08:59 am Title: An Introduction
!!!!!!! Oh my God, okay, it’s happening!
1 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2022 03:30 am Title: An Introduction
Great concept - love your cupid's voice.
Taking Michael's goof and making it a thing, worked well.
This should be fun.
1 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2022 01:41 am Title: An Introduction
This sounds like it's going to be great fun! I'm loving your Cupid, and am completely buying that he and Creed hung out in the 70s. Looking forward to seeing what happens!
1 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2022 11:43 pm Title: An Introduction
Ooooh, like Erin would say, “Fun!”
Great opening chapter. Really looking forward to this!
1 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2022 11:24 pm Title: An Introduction
Oh this is so good already! Loved the introduction. Hilarious about Creed. Love the way you’ve written Cupid. Can’t wait for more!
1 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2022 09:55 pm Title: An Introduction
YAY IT'S HERE.
Okay, I really like the start to this. You've given Cupid a very distinctive voice and a very vivid image here, and this is a fun way to reimagine the character as something of a world-weary sophisticate frustrated with the foibles of us mere mortals.
His rivalry with Eros was a nice touch... as was the reference to Pam's beauty in ordinary things line. But I think my favorite bit is that it turns out that Michael's malaprop with Cupid's sparrow is actually more accurate than our standard version of how Cupid works. Another accidental Michael moment of wisdom! (The description of why it's a "sparrow" is terrific, too.)
Looking forward to the rest of the ride!
1 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2022 09:39 pm Title: An Introduction
Ww this is GENIUS. The concept alone has me wanting all of the chapters right now, but the way you have written Cupid has me on the verge of begging for them all right now. I love me some Jim and Pam, but I have a feeling Cupid is going to be the highlight of this story. Amazing. Also the fact that only Creed can see him? Im dying. Perfectenshlag.