Date: February 01, 2022 06:31 pm Title: Kevin Malone
I like this choice of where to start. Also some of the ways Cupid here is moving. He sets things up, but in the end it's the person who decides what to do with his messages. Nice to get a glimpse of his methods for sure.
Oh Kevin, what are we going to do with you? At times he has so much potential, but most of the time he just misses the mark. Maybe Apollo would be a better patron god for Kevin, being the god of music and drumming is one thing Kev is actually good at.
1 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2022 05:33 pm Title: Kevin Malone
Okay this concept is so much fun and I can't wait to read all of the characters' chapters!
*Now listen. I don't get many chances with Kevin.*
SCREAMING
Awesome idea, WW. Excited for more.
1 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2022 11:18 am Title: Kevin Malone
Aw, WW! I loved this!! Poor Kevin never catches a break in the game of love, and I loved hearing Cupid's reasoning behind this.
"...she felt as if they should just be friends. I hate that phrase." I loved this, don't we ALL hate the friend zone?
Great job, WW! Excited to read more!
1 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2022 11:18 am Title: Kevin Malone
Bless Kevin. Loved the bacon backstory here from OL! Really enjoying Cupid’s tone of voice, it’s hilarious!
1 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2022 10:40 am Title: Kevin Malone
This story about how Stacy and Kevin met is perfect, and really effective embraces the ways in which Kevin is basically a big kid. A big, creepy kid. Stacy's a trooper, really.
Working in Lynn's bacon breakfast as a "sparrow" is a really good connection between semi-canon and concept, too.
Date: February 01, 2022 10:15 am Title: Kevin Malone
Oh, Kevin. Man of few words (why waste time say lot word when few word do trick, anyway?) but also seemingly always saying the wrong thing when it comes to love. I dont blame Cupid for eventually admitting defeat. Maybe he can retire with Kevin and just lay on the beach eating hot dogs.
1 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2022 09:04 am Title: Kevin Malone
HAHA this was so funny. I loooove the story of Kevin meeting Stacy in an ice cream truck line. You really enhanced their whole relationship by telling it from Cupid’s perspective. Haha I can’t wait for the next chapter.