Reviews For Cupid's Sparrow
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Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2022 11:04 am Title: Oscar Martinez

I love his brother’s response, lol!

Aw, I wish Eric would have worked out for Oscar, that sounded sweet and it would have been nice if he had his partner hidden while working at DM (not like he didn’t already with Gil)

“ Two people may have received it due to their workplace proximity. But I'll get to that later.” Please do, I can’t WAIT to hear that story!

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2022 01:39 pm Title: Oscar Martinez

You've heard me say this before, but I can't get over how funny you are.

*For a man who loves facts so much, it really took him a while to embrace the fact that he was attracted to men.*

Dying.

You introduced the Oscar/Angela/senator love triangle in such a clever way, and I'm so excited to read Angela's chapter now.

Reviewer: grc73 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2022 12:28 pm Title: Oscar Martinez

Sheer brilliance!

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2022 12:17 pm Title: Oscar Martinez

“For a man who loves facts so much, it really took him a while to embrace the fact that he was attracted to men.” I died.
-5 points for not including an *actually* somewhere in there but +100 points for the setup to the story about the senator. Freaking genius.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2022 10:04 am Title: Oscar Martinez

What I like about this is it shows what Cupid won't do for people. He offers them a level of respect to figure things out for themselves. Sometimes to their detriment for sure. Loved the lines about considering how obsessed with facts Oscar is, it took him quite a while to see the facts in front of his face. Also, the last bit with the Senator got a good laugh as well. Nice job.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2022 09:36 am Title: Oscar Martinez

Okay, HIGHLY intrigued by the idea that the STATE senator debacle is in part due to Cupid's interference, and I am now looking forward to Angela's chapter even more.

Lines I loved here:

"Yes, I have seen the movie Ghost. No, it was not like that." - I just love the tone here. This is a Cupid who has seen it all.

"Oscar's brother responded with one word: "Duh."" HA.

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