Reviews For Cupid's Sparrow
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Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2022 06:47 pm Title: Michael Scott

I know I say this all the time, but you are so fucking funny. I’m running out of ways to tell you and quotes to reference. More chapters please.

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2022 12:56 pm Title: Michael Scott

This chapter was perfectly done, you nailed every aspect of Michael, his pure heart and his need to be loved (and where that stemmed from), his reversed logic and actions, his cartoon eyes face at seeing Jan's boob job.

Oh and you pretty much nailed Jan too and all told with the Cupid humor that this story has been doing so wonderfully. I mean- Keep your arms and legs inside the ride- love it.

I loved the Michael Holly love story almost as much as I loved Jam - the speech he gives about them at the company picnic - I saw that as a huge turning point for him - now he still wasn't completely evolved - as you point out there was Helene and Donna and Scott's Tots still had to happen but now I like to think some sparrows had been sent to get him to the place of that speech.

And with the point that he left his everything for his new everything - well that kind of sums it all up. A Very wise Cupid indeed.

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2022 09:25 pm Title: Dwight Schrute

Ugh I love this perspective of Dwangela. These last two chapters were so sweet and heartwarming and hilarious. Good job.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2022 04:10 pm Title: Dwight Schrute

"A boar sees a sow, a boar breeds with a sow, and the Schrutes are able to continue having bacon on the breakfast table." This is a sext, Dwight style. I love the Schrute family/Dwight backstory here, along with the documented growth of Dwight's, uh, skillset. #DwightIsGoodInBedIsCanon

Love and Cupid playing no part in the on-paper-high-quality relationship between Dwight and Esther is a strong choice, I think. And I'm intrigued by the idea that Jim might well have served the sparrow's purpose here.

Also. Write the Mose chapter.

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2022 03:49 pm Title: Dwight Schrute

Aaaaand then he killed Sprinkles. I can hear your cupid’s disappoint here. But it totally made me laugh. As did Mose scares the hell out of me. The voice and tone throughout all these is perfect.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2022 06:34 pm Title: Angela Martin

Great analysis of Angela from Cupid here. I loved all the bits of humor too. The recurring themes going through everything. Angela's weakness for authority combined with her stubbornness. It all fit perfectly.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2022 04:23 pm Title: Angela Martin

First off - is it *really* heaven if you can't get the equivalent of a Blizzard?

I love the Pastor Davis relationship here, because it makes so much sense that the person to lead Angela astray would be someone from the church. "Let's just say you probably don't want to sit in any of the back four pews of that church" - what is with her and semi-public spaces?

"I think you would make an excellent regional manager." This is a sext.

"He was about to ruin one of my favorite pairings, and with Dairy Queen on the line!" I feel this so hard.

This is such a fun Cupid voice in general, and it really shines through in this chapter - between the Dairy Queen and him being bitter with Dwight and his specific rules of Cupid-ing, he's just great here.

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2022 10:44 am Title: Angela Martin

These have been such a joy to read. So much fun. Looking forward to the ones to come.

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2022 10:44 am Title: Angela Martin

These have been such a joy to read. So much fun. Looking forward to the ones to come.

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2022 09:02 am Title: Angela Martin

I freaking love that you made sure to include (state) everytime you mentioned the senator hahahah I also love that Cupid was so determined to get that Blizzard. This was SUCH a good chapter!!

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2022 08:53 am Title: Andy Bernard

Andy truly does suck when it comes to love, doesnt he? I feel more and more sorry for Cupid as these chapters go on hahahah

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2022 01:50 pm Title: Ryan Howard

"Don't drink and matchmake, friends."

Honestly, this explains so much.

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2022 12:53 pm Title: Andy Bernard

I know you didn't like this chapter, but you did such a good job with it! Andy really is a piece of work.

*However, I did not expect him to propose.

Nor did I expect her to say yes.*

This made me LOL.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2022 12:07 pm Title: Andy Bernard

This is a good insight into Andy - the combination of entitlement and insecurity is bound to have unpleasant results.

"Life or a few too many rit-dit-dit-di-doos got in the way" is going on Andy's tombstone.

Cupid giving Angela a push explains a *lot* of Season 4, really.

I love the running gag of Cupid blaming Eros for the bad matches!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2022 09:30 am Title: Andy Bernard

Yeah that's Andy. From the start where he thinks everything is owed to him to all his relationship mishaps. Nice to get some context behind it all too.

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2022 08:07 am Title: Kelly Kapoor

Haha this one was great!
I just …I … I can’t hahahah amazing!

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2022 07:47 pm Title: Kelly Kapoor

I hate Chad. But I love the idea that Kelly wasn’t the Kelly we have all grown to know and love because of a boy treating her like crap. It makes total sense. Now if only Cupid could time travel and have Kelly and Ravi stay together, that’d be great

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2022 07:38 pm Title: Kelly Kapoor

I’m DYING at the idea of Kelly stealing her ex’s dad’s boat. That’s a stroke of genius right there. That’s what she said.

Reviewer: Coley Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2022 06:18 pm Title: Kelly Kapoor

“And boy, did Kelly cling.”

Every single word of this story has been delightful and I’ve laughed so many times (and maybe I also have a crush on Cupid and will fight BT for him) but this chapter might be my favorite so far.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2022 02:09 pm Title: Kelly Kapoor

Ooooof. The idea that pre-full Mindy Kelly is *also* acting the way she does to make a guy happy stings. Poor Cupid. You know, he's really not having a whole lot of luck with this crowd...

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2022 01:10 pm Title: Kelly Kapoor

Really like getting some of the backstory for Kelly. How she toned down until the cameras showed up and then out came the "old" Kelly. Clinging like a barnacle is such a great line for her because it fits so much. I like the idea though this fic that Cupid can screw up from time to time. I think I see that here in a different way. Kelly might say she loves love, but I think what she really loves isn't love, isn't Ryan, isn't attention. She loves drama. All those other things feed into her love of drama and her want and need to be in the center of it. Nice job.

Reviewer: Once Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2022 04:51 pm Title: Ryan Howard

The humour in this is consistently laugh out loud outstanding.

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2022 03:59 pm Title: Ryan Howard

The blonde hair was definitely a mistake, but I guess we can’t blame cupid on that one. I am absolutely loving the backstories and reasonings you are coming up with for everybody!

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2022 03:53 pm Title: Ryan Howard

Lol, Cupid being drunk on Feb. 13 and bringing Ryan and Kelly makes the MOST sense.

Also, their hatred of Ryan's hair is hilarious!!

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2022 03:44 pm Title: Ryan Howard

I love having Cupid involved in Kelly and Ryan’s story, mainly because it abstains them of any personal responsibility. Good job with this one!

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