1 [Report This]Date: June 21, 2023 09:53 am Title: Chapter 5
Pam saw Jim’s parents! And Roy’s arrested!? Why am I not that surprised?
1 [Report This]Date: November 13, 2022 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
I know I'm late with this review, I hope you can forgive me. HOWEVER, THIS WAS EVERYTHING. I love Jim and Betsy's banter, the part with the Fruity Pebbles and Grape Soda was great. Also, she's right. Mom's know everything (which I know you are well aware of already). Pam running into Jim's parents? Brilliant. THAT ENDING THOUGH! Fitting for Roy.
KEEP. THESE. COMING!
Author's Response:
As DJC in his review, if you can't have fruity pebbles every morning as an adult, what's the point? Haha
I'm glad you liked it! Hopefully I can write more soon!
1 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2022 11:27 am Title: Chapter 5
AMAZING. Glad to see this one is back!
Hand to blog: I was sitting there reading the first Jim section being like "you're playing a dangerous game, Jim. One bad click and you're outed." And THEN IT HAPPENED. Great minds.
"It was him. He had found her. He wanted to find her." EEEP.
Some interesting parallelism to canon here... as always, the arrival of Jim isn't just about a transfer of affection but about making Pam realize she's unsatisfied with how things are.
""You're a grown man, son. Despite the fact that you just put Fruity Pebbles and grape soda in my shopping cart." If being a grown-up means eating Fruity Pebbles for breakfast whenever you want, what's even the point?
Okay. I love Betsy.
"He wasn’t always the perfect boyfriend, but he tried. For every time he messed up, he made sure to sincerely make up for it afterward. But gradually, after being together for a few years, he began to ask for forgiveness less often and rather just expect it instead." This sounds spot on.
Okay, THAT'S a twist ending, and now you owe us an update ASAP as possible.
P.S. Michael's pet insurance company is genius.
Author's Response:
I would like for your to write a rejected cold open involving Michael wanting to start a pet insurance company. Kthanks.
And thanks for reviewing, as always!! I'll try to get the next part soon, with the promise of some more Betsy Halpert.
1 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2022 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
So glad this is back! And Oooooooh! Cliffhanger!
Author's Response: Gotta keep you hooked! Haha thanks for reading!! <3
1 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2022 09:56 am Title: Chapter 5
OMG. OMG. OMG!!!!!!! I love this! I love this story and Jam and Serendipity and this is SO good!!!! Um, yes Pam, you are in a rom com. Have you seen the movie??? It’s delightful. I love that she’s feeling the angst in her Roy relationship… and loved the little Michael/Holly details. And yes, Jim. I do believe and hope and pray that fate will let you bump into Pam in Scranton!!!!! Betsy…. Who doesn’t love some Betsy Halpert? We saw far too little of her in the series, but she never disappoints in canon!!! And oh Roy… interrupting the fate connection in the restaurant with Jim’s parents… ohhhhh. Holy cliffhanger!!! Please post soon….. love these two pining for each other and hope they make a skating rink glove connection soon!!!!!!
1 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2022 09:54 am Title: Chapter 5
OMG. OMG. OMG!!!!!!! I love this! I love this story and Jam and Serendipity and this is SO good!!!! Um, yes Pam, you are in a rom com. Have you seen the movie??? It’s delightful. I love that she’s feeling the angst in her Roy relationship… and loved the little Michael/Holly details. And yes, Jim. I do believe and hope and pray that fate will let you bump into Pam in Scranton!!!!! Betsy…. Who doesn’t love some Betsy Halpert? We saw far too little of her in the series, but she never disappoints in canon!!! And oh Roy… interrupting the fate connection in the restaurant with Jim’s parents… ohhhhh. Holy cliffhanger!!! Please post soon….. love these two pining for each other and hope they make a skating rink glove connection soon!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Hopefully I'll get to the next part soon! Haha I'm also glad you love Serendipity because it definitely has some sway on this story
1 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2022 01:33 am Title: Chapter 5
As with every other update, this was just so so great. I'm already waiting for the next chapter!
The only thing I love more than Jam? Betsy Halpert. And you have nailed her in my headcanon perfectly!
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I am so glad you liked Betsy! This is always how I picture her and so she's fun to write. Jim as a Mama's boy is everything so I will write it that way every time. Haha thanks for the review!
1 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2022 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
They are SO CLOSE but SO FAR. If you make them not run into each other after all of this Im never reviewing again (we both know thats a lie but shh). Also I love Betsy and I wish she was my mom.
Roy’s dumb.
Author's Response:
Roy IS dumb. So dumb. Really dumb. For real.
Date: November 07, 2022 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
So Roy is in fine form. And by fine form I mean he's his normal oafish taking Pam for granted self. To just completely blow her off like that? When he knows they've been planning dinner with her parents for night out with his buddies? Yeah, time to leave him Pam.
Then Jim shows up, kind of, again and she gets a bit of a spark back. Gotta love that. Same with the heart to heart Jim has with Betsy. Love the fact he's getting some outside perspective.
Then fate does seem to be on her side. Though now she also has a choice. Go find Jim or bail out Roy. Should be really interesting to see which one she'll choose. Especially with the way Roy has been treating her and her current feelings towards him. Great update!
Author's Response: I felt a little bad making Roy such an oaf, but...he's an oaf. Haha thanks your your reviews as always!