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Reviewer: Receptionitis15 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2024 11:39 am Title: The Third Month Part Three

Ooooh do I smell D R A M A cooking? Hello Christy Kelly!! Is Cathy gonna get fired (hope so?) are we gonna meet Billy?? Please write faster old boy. We love Jim being supportive with Pam's concerns re: Scranton, look forward to seeing how that trip ends up going!

Author's Response:

Do you smell it? I should hope so because I am cooking it up and stirring that pot!

Man there's so much more to come, can you just write it for me? 

Reviewer: WithaY Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2024 05:50 pm Title: The Third Month Part Two

Oh, here I am! Not trying to procrastinate! Just catching up on my reviews! I loved this chapter, btw. I love HD Jim so much, though, so I wasn't surprised. You did the sweet New York "not on the same page" bit SO WELL! I always wondered why Jam felt "off" during this day because when filmed, they're clearly on the same page--on the phone at the same times, talking about the same things... totally on the same page! Either way, it's darling!

And I have to say that I definitely disagree with Pam... Helene CAN stay at a hotel. Frankly, with these demands, Helene SHOULD stay at a hotel. Taking over Pam's room? Good lord. I mean, she could have been Googling nearby hotels instead of interrupting her daughter's sexts with her boyfriend, you know? Ugh... Michael asking about turkey parts at Thanksgiving is going to be the LEAST awkward part of Thanksgiving now! I suppose it does give her something to bond over with Betsy... but still. Kinda can't wait to see the next in person Helene/Jim interaction!

It's def a tough call between demanding, awkward having seen Jim's penis Helene and the hormonal combo of uppity, pissed, holier than thou Angela and no filter, in a truly questionable relationship, unfiltered Kelly. I don't envy Pam having to make this decision. I would pick Jim and painting. Somewhere far, far, away from this mess. Good Lord! Nice touch with the differently priced items of Helene's. Could she be a little bit insecure about her daughter's success? I mean, she certainly picked nice, middle of the road options but much more affordable than Pam's. Great detail!

I love that Jam took advantage of technology allowing Jim to FaceTime into the appointment. We all knew he and his baby book journal/notebook/pro and cons lists weren't going to miss it though. Speaking of, that whole scene was GOLD and needs to be FILMED. Jim on the phone making wisecracks, Helene making googly eyes at Michael, Michael trying to impress an interested Helene, and a mortified Pam is just comedic brilliance! I love all the lines. Michael's birth stats, Helene's correcting him, and Jim's "pretty sure that's not how that works" is just so perfect! I LOVE it! I did find Pam a bit rude in accepting the call about De La Renta. Especially since it came from Angela. Crabby Angela. Leave the poor woman alone at her prenatal appointment! But excited for them at this new prospect and all it has to offer the HD world!!!

And smut. Glorious smut. How sweet of Jim to surprise Pam! Perfect use of the brilliantly delivered "No, I just missed my wife" line too. And yes, I do agree with Jim--Pam should be more careful about working alone after hours. I'm glad he mentioned it. I hope he did lock that door. Something makes me wonder that someone probably saw something and will result in an awkward Jam interaction. At least it wasn't Helene though! And just like that, all's right in the world again--Jim, Pam, and baby are back together again! Can't wait to see the maternity things you have picked for Pam now that she's popped! I mean, she is a De La Renta girl after all! Thanks for this glorious AU that is so fun and lovely! You're the BEST!! Much love friend! See you soon!!!

Author's Response: I don’t even know where to begin to reply on this one 🙈 so I’ll just say thank you so much and I’ll see you soon!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02, 2024 10:53 am Title: The Third Month Part Three

Okay, I'll review the rest later, but Jim's drinking Yamazaki whiskey? Good choice! Wish I had some right now. Moving on.

Nice to see things moving along. Loved seeing Jim and Pam out on a date. Especially considering they still can't keep their hands off each other. It's wonderful to see that they still just want to be close like that.

The trip to Scranton seems like it'll be an interesting one for sure. Not just with Kelly barging herself into it, but with all the drama Pam is facing.

Speaking of Kelly, I'm with Jim. I've never been a fan of Ryan, and you did a great job in confirming that. How he's more interested in his phone, he doesn't listen to Kelly, just does something halfway, still lives with his mom. Seriously, he's not great.

Getting lots more of the characters together for the class was a lot of fun. Gabe being at a Lamaze class even though he's adopting seems to ring true. Guy is just weird. What I do love is Erin and Pete together like this. And they're expecting a baby too! Must be something in the water over there in NYC. Always love seeing Erin and Pete get together.

Meredith trying to put the moves on Jim is a nice nod to canon as well. Maybe one of these days Jim will have to sign a fake name on something just to throw her off his tail for a bit.

Loved getting the update for this one.

Oh and I would be remiss if I didn't mention Dwight. He's in full Dwight glory that's for sure. Maybe it's the beets that are the root cause of all the new kiddos! I'm sure he'd love to think of that.

Author's Response:

Thought you'd like that one about the whiskey!

Scranton will definitely be interesting, but that's still to come. And yes, Ryan is totally the worst!

I love Erin and Pete too! There was a little nod to Erin being pregnant a while back, and I've been wanting to get back to it for so long! So glad I finally could.

So glad you enjoyed the update and thanks as always for the review 

Reviewer: New Hogfan Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2024 10:24 am Title: The Third Month Part Three

You’re back!
Yes Pam needs the fire crazy Cathy.
Meredith having a back room Lamaze class
sounds exactly like something she would do. 😂
Phyllis wanting to have a baby at her age just shows how jealous and bitter she was on the show when the younger female employees got the attention.
Stanley here is a creep like always.
Pam returning to Scranton makes me wonder if she is going to have a run-in with Roy. 🤔
Please update soon!!!

Author's Response:

I'm sorry it's been so long! I really do promise to get better at this one, the other fics are almost all done and out the way so I can crack on with this one!!

I love your reviews so much and you really nailed something right on the head here! 

Next update will be soon I promise!! 

Reviewer: InRomanovWeTrust Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2024 06:23 pm Title: The Third Month Part One

Y’all will have made me call the Louvre THREE TIMES TODAY NOW. QUIT. OR FIND ME A NEW MUSEUM.

In all seriousness, I love have your writing and story has evolved. I’ve always loved it of course, but damn these past few stories you’ve like kicked it up a notch. It’s a damn shame I don’t have anymore jellies to give… but at least we can add this piece to the exhibit they have over there in that hoity toity French museum.

Author's Response:

I am so sorry you've made so many calls.

But thank you thank you thank you! You are far too kind to me. I'm so happy you're still loving this! 

Reviewer: Graceface Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2023 12:54 pm Title: The Third Month Part Two

Great update as always Mrsk! Loved the nods to cannon in J&P missing each other's calls and Helene & Michael, can't wait to see how the last one plays out with your version of Helene who comes across as a battle axe! She scares me a little!

The pic on Pams phone, oh my god, I got second hand embarrassment!! Obviously that is thanks to your writing which, as always, was spectacular, making it so easy to picture everything and really live it!

Author's Response:

Thank you thank you thank you, you are far too find. Glad you enjoyed it apart from the embarrassment!!

Reviewer: WithaY Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2023 07:21 pm Title: The Third Month Part One

Okay, first things first, why yes, I AM procrastinating Christmas again! (Saw this great meme BTW about people asking this time of year if you're ready for the holiday and the reply was, "No, Susan, I'm not even ready for TODAY." You know, I just felt so HEARD!!) But OMG, it's totally fine when we have an HD beardy CEO Jim's giant walk in closet with a Jam mirror reflection conversation which was soooo cute! And the little baby bump part? Loooooooooved. More of that please! And I'm also super excited to see more of what fashion Pam will be wearing as her bump gets bigger. I'm a little worried for her in this skirt--and BTW, she and Jim are totally soulmates because he totally thinks she's sad about missing her skirt and not him--he just knows her love for fashion, am I right?

Pam might need to go buy some cute and fashionable maternity clothes, but I think I NEED Mindy Kaling as Kelly to say these lines you have written because they are just soooo good and speak volumes about the dysfunction that is Kelly and Ryan and twins. OMG. Just the tension that comes up when she says 4 sentences is sooo palpable! Good lord, how is Jim going to handle Lamaze with them? Also, sweet callback to Jim's fidget necklace as Pam fidgets with it--but how is Kelly missing that rock around Pam's neck? Just saying... that's not a little diamond!!

And did this chapter include smut for smut's sake? Not smut with a purpose?? You're spoiling us! Though I was incredibly terrified that someone was going to walk in and see Pam, even if it was a janitor. I love that Jim is absolutely convinced that there is a difference between FaceTime and phone sex, too.

Love my Jo Malone NBH shout out too! I just purchased a jar of the cream at Nordstrom the other day and the salesperson must have told me no less than 3 times that she wished she could "love herself as much as" I loved myself because she'd never spend $95 on body cream. Insert rolling eyes emoji. Times 100. But also, is there any question why Jim can't keep his hands and other body parts off of Pam when she smells just so delish? Bonus points to Jam for being creative and trying a FaceTime joint shower even if the technical didn't pan out. Jim might have definitely won the better half of the bet in the Creed pitch bet with Pam because Creed is so weird and difficult to work with. And maybe on second thought Pam deserved all of her virtual Jim-assisted orgasms because an extra long weekend with Helene does not sound fun at all... oh dear.. sorry you can't drink at the moment! This was such a jam packed chapter and I loved it! (Pun intended!) So much Jam even when they weren't even in the same state! This is such an epic story and I'm never gonna beg for more but I love so much when we get new chapters of this delish, sexy, hilarious and sweet AU you've created! Much love and thanks for sharing as always!

Author's Response:

Oh I feel you Susan. Literally me with everything!

Baby bump talk was all for you my friend! Had to get that in for you! (twss) And lamaze willl be fun for sure

The smut kind of had a purpose, but in the end its all just for smut's sake really hahahha! And yeah, I couldn't do that to Pam, have someone walk in. How mortifying!!!

And of course Jo Malone for you!

Thank you as ever for your EPIC review!!! 

Reviewer: Receptionitis15 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 12, 2023 11:22 am Title: The Third Month Part Two

Okay I loved all the references to the episodes in here with the missed connection calls and the 'no I just missed my girlfriend' - just love it! Helene being an absolute SNEAK there, truly such an 'oh my' moment there (but also gosh so annoying, it's laundry Helene calm down). But whoosh that ending! You were not lying when you got carried away with that. Of course he's won her over to the idea of an office bang, we see you Pam with your 'there's always next time'! Splendid work old chap, pip pip.

Author's Response:

Well aren’t you the best. Thank you greatly

Don’t worry, I won’t let myself get so carried away next time 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2023 05:17 pm Title: The Third Month Part Two

Nice call back there from the show about the dueling voicemails. Even better considering Pam's still in New York with this one.

Wow, Helene's a bit much isn't she? Just demanding Pam give up her room because of clothes on the bed and there's no way she wasn't snooping Pam's phone. One thing I'll say is that Pam needs to learn to set some boundaries. Helen's walking all over her. Pam's not a child anymore and Helene needs to respect that.

And of course Helene and Michael are getting all goo-goo eyed over each other. I doubt it'll last very long but still.

Then Jim comes home early, with another great show reference by the way, and they can't keep themselves off each other. Very hot and descriptive. Even better that they can have some privacy considering the houseguest Pam has.

Author's Response:

Oh I’m glad you liked the voicemails! Was a little tricky to make it work. And glad you got the other reference too when Jim came home!

I had a lot of fun with Michael and Helene in this one. Hope they don’t have too much fun themselves 🫣

Thanks as always for the review! 


Reviewer: Robert Dunder Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2023 01:40 pm Title: The Third Month Part Two

You are not low key obsessed with him.

If Helene is so upset about Jim’s penis, she should return the favor and show Pam a picture of Michael’s. Seems fair.

That poor office has seen a lot of things. I wonder how it’ll fare under a black light test.

No jellybeans but here’s a picture. Of what? Of Jim’s big nose of course.

Author's Response:

I’m as low key obsessed as you are. 

I’m not bringing Michael’s penis into this. Twss

Thanks for the nose. Wonder what I can do with that  

Reviewer: New Hogfan Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2023 01:53 pm Title: The Third Month Part Two

Yay you’re back!
I’ve been really missing this story.
Helene would drive me crazy too.
Very uppity and entitled.
At least she didn’t walk in on them having sex in Pam’s office like Jim’s mom did. 😂
It was funny when you included the flirting between Helene and Michael like in canon.
I loved seeing how excited Jim was for Pam’s new client. Even though I’m not a huge Kelly fan, I do hope that she comes to her senses and dumps Ryan for good because he’s just not that into her.
Please update soon!!!

Author's Response:

I'm sorry!! I've been really hoping to get more chapters out, I really will do better next year I promise!

Glad you liked this chapter, I promise there will be more soon. Thanks so much as always for your review! 

Reviewer: maryc Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2023 11:28 am Title: The Brief

Your storytelling is so intoxicating and I can’t wait to read more, so I beg you please please do not give up on this story it is so enjoyable!! I love the way you’ve written Jim and Pam for this story, please keep the chapters coming! Thank You

Author's Response:

Oh my goodness thank you so much, that’s really made my day!! So happy that you’re enjoying this as I love writing it! And don’t worry, I’m still working on it, just some pesky other fics getting in the way. But there will be a new update very soon I promise

Thank you so very much! 

Reviewer: afox Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2023 03:20 am Title: The Third Month Part One

Loved this! So happy jts back!

Author's Response: Ah thank you! Sorry it took a while to get it up (twss). Glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: Receptionitis15 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 24, 2023 12:49 pm Title: The Third Month Part One

Just a filler? Oooook then.
You write their interactions with such a consistent Jam vibe - from sad-they're-about-to-be-apart to FaceTime boinks you never lose that Jim & Pam feel.
Sad times about the expensive skirt ripping - never a fun moment - but hopefully Pam comes round to the maternity wear and finds something cute and comfortable for her.
Love the ideas Pam comes up with for crazy Creed - who doesn't love a good hot dog?
(As I write this, Jim has just asked Pam out... good timing)
Seems Helene is gonna be a bit of an obstacle in Pam's mission for FaceTime sex (and painting I guess) - looking forward to seeing how this visit goes!

Author's Response:

Ah thank you!! That means so much!!

There's gonna be some fun times ahead with Helene. I promise it will be back soon...ish

Thanks so much for just being the best! And for being awesome at Office trivia, apart from that one question that I saved our butts on. 

Reviewer: Graceface Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2023 12:16 pm Title: The Third Month Part One

YAY FOR UPDATES! You have no idea how happy it makes me to see the name of this fic in the notifications.

You are so good at getting the characters spot on. You placed Creed being manager so perfectly into to this chapter!

I feel for Pam not getting her "me time" but cant wait to see what having her mum around brings!

Author's Response:

Oh bless you! You're too much

I do love Creed, he's so much fun to write. And poor old Pam. I mean, this isn't going to be a rom-com without the com now is it? 

Thanks so much for your review. YOU ARE THE BEST 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2023 03:30 am Title: The Third Month Part One

Glad to have this one back! Life has to go on so there we go. Really great that even though they're apart, they can still find time to message each other. The steamy FaceTime helps a lot too.

Kind of feels like all three Ordinary Things ladies are really starting to feel the effects of their pregnancies. Kelly feels even more over the top that she normally is. Angela more sharp. And Pam, well she just wants Jim and maybe to fit into her clothes.

Helene's in town now. Feels like that has the potential for a big can of worms. Especially if Helene is also going to be meeting Michael. Hope we get a new update soon.

Author's Response:

Ah thank you so much!

Pregnancy is about to kick it up a gear, there's going to be all sorts of fun and games heading our way soon.

Oh Helene is going to be fun for sure.

Thanks as always for your review and support 

Reviewer: New Hogfan Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2023 03:21 am Title: The Third Month Part One

I’ve been missing this so much!
For a minute there I thought someone was going to walk in on Pam!
Kelly is as annoying as always. I don’t doubt for a
second that Ryan would dump her and walk away
from the babies.
I’m curious about what’s going to happen in Scranton. Will get a run in with Roy?
Please Please Please update soon!

Author's Response:

I'm so sorry for the delay! I really am going to try and speed up (I've just needed a bit of a break)

I thought I'd give these kids some uninterrupted time - doesn't happen often!

Scranton will be fun. It'll be a few chapters away, but I'm going to try and get to it ASAP as possible

Thanks as always for your review and support! 

Reviewer: afox Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2023 03:40 am Title: The Second Month Part Seven

Please pleas can you update? I love this!!

Author's Response: I'm working on it! Will get the next update out ASAP as possible!

Reviewer: WithaY Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2023 11:19 am Title: The Second Month Part Seven

FINALLY I'm doing an official review for this--however, I think you did get an in person review from me in London and how many people can say that?! Thanks for your patience--and I'm SO GLAD THIS IS BACK!!! I needed HD Jim and Pam so much! I'm so disappointed that Gerald can't get his act together... I'm worried that he and Jim won't find some resolution until it's too late. We don't see a ton of Betsy, or out of story Betsy, but sometimes I wish she was more forceful with Gerald and supportive of Jim. She lets Jim go away far too easily, in my opinion.

BUT I do LOVE Pam reminding Jim that "they" are three now, because that is very sweet and adorable and very true! Their tiny family will always support each other and I love it.

Girl. The whole Helene's apartment scene was soooo funny!!! Pam was SO worked up!! It was funny and yes, why are Jim's pants so tight?? Not that I'm complaining, but to meet the mom? I get it Pam, I do. I ADORED her snapping at Jim when he told her that she shouldn't get worked up-- I mean, that perfectly illustrated how worked up she was! And you write the cringiest Helene ever... she hates men but she's attracted to Jim? Oh Helene... now we know why Pam tries to steer clear.

I felt the cold breeze when we met Meemaw. Good lord.. that icy demeanor! I loved that bit about the booties on Helene's carpet, and especially when it was called back moments later by Helene herself. So hilarious! I loved Penny hiding in the kitchen, when Pam was going to "go and um" (GREAT line, by the way). The exasperation was so evident between the two and funny. I could almost follow Pam's line of thought that she could hide this baby from Helene and Meemaw--because it does seem almost as bad as she was making it out to be. But I did love Pam just ripping off the bandaid and telling her fam about the pregnancy when she couldn't partake in the wine. And that was BRILLIANT use of the canon, darling, sweet moment and line of Jim's "Wow! There is is!" One of my favorite parts of this chapter. Jim did a great job of defending his and Pam's choices--in fact, they both do, with the other person's family--but that's real life isn't it? You just can't always be objective with your own crazy people--but I loved Jim's calm but firm defense of their situation.

They definitely deserved every second of that vacation, good lord! R15, excellent swimsuit choice for Jim! Loved it! And what good is a private villa pool if you can't get it on with your sexy significant other in a tropical paradise?? Thanks for allowing Jam to have a moment of passion despite your policy of only essential smut.

I'm glad Pam said "wait" to Jim's proposal. She's going to say yes, and he's going to ask--but they're doing it on their timetable and I respect that. Even though Meemaw does not. And there we go with that sweet Pam reminder that she and the baby are not going anywhere. Great chapter!

Well look at that! You're back; HD's back, and now, the epic reviews are back too! As always thanks for . It was lovely to dish over this in person--such fun that I will always treasure! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

You spoil me with these reviews, thank you so so much!!

I love how much you loved the booties but. That made me laugh so much to write it!!

Hopefully I’ll get the next chapter out soon for you!! 

Reviewer: _littlehappier_ Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2023 02:15 pm Title: The Second Month Part Seven

I love this story so much! Can't wait for the next chapter, please hurry up 😂d84;a039;

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much!! So happy you're enjoying it! I'm working on it and hopefully it won't be toooo long

Reviewer: Robert Dunder Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2023 05:56 pm Title: The Second Month Part Seven

Yay for the update!

More Jim and Gerald drama. Oof. Man needs a hug. Maybe from his own father.

For all the talk about men being the root of all evil, Helene sure does want a piece of Jim to herself. I guess she had needs. Meemaw, on the other hand. Maybe they should name the baby after her. Also, really funny that Pam was the one who spilled the beans.

Lol at the proposal. Pam probably doesn’t have expectations but a billionaire should know better.

I don’t have any jellies but I don’t know… have a record player instead. I found it while robbing someone’s house.

Author's Response: Um no thank you, that record player needs to stay just where it is. It's important 

Reviewer: raspberry jam Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2023 02:52 pm Title: The Brief

Oh I’m so very late to this, but am loving it!

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! There's lots to come still, so hope you keep enjoying it!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2023 09:43 am Title: The Second Month Part Seven

Big chapter for both sets of parents for sure. I see a bit of canon Jim here at the start. Running away and avoiding his problems rather than facing them. I get this Jim is intimidated by his father and all, but honestly it would probably help if those two would finally sit down and really hash things out. I know Jim has felt like he's tried, but often it seems like it didn't quite land. The fact the record player got left behind though seems like an important detail.

Likewise for Pam bringing Jim to meet Helene for the first time. Penny is 100% correct. Helene is totally projecting all her issues on any guy. Saying things like "all men are the same." She's also being very manipulative of Pam. Claiming "I'm only trying to protect you," and all. Feels like a real Mother Gothel and Rapunzel gaslighting vibe there. Though considering Meemaw is in top form it's not a surprise where Helene gets it from. Good for Jim for standing up for himself here and for Pam though. Countering the idea that the man is only the breadwinner and the woman is only the child raiser. No. They can both provide and they can both raise the child. Good way to call that out. Feels like some of it might have gotten through to Helene there at the end.

A very nice moment there on vacation for sure. Despite it all they still love being so close to each other and it's great to see. Pam not accepting what feels like a forced proposal was great on her part too. Yes they both know they're in it for the long haul, but it's also important for them to do things for themselves. Not because of some outside pressure.

The pictures about everything are always great as well.

Author's Response:

Oh I'm glad you picked up on the record player! 

I hope Helene came across ok. I wanted to strike the balance between the canon Helene that we see telling Pam she doesn't need to go through with it and the one that gets with Michael - and all in one part of the chapter!

Glad you still like the pictures! I sure do love shopping for thee two!

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: grc73 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2023 08:52 pm Title: The Second Month Part Seven

Lovely to have this back! Great chapter, I’ve missed these guys!

Author's Response: Ah thank you so much! Sorry for the delay! So glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: Receptionitis15 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2023 12:53 pm Title: The Second Month Part Seven

I'm just so happy that the pants are in the fic and the swim shorts starring role was also a highlight for me.

Intrigued re: the forgotten record player! You did good with the balance of Helene being anti men but pro Jim. Sylvia certainly doesn't help! Look forward to seeing what the new year brings these 2...

Author's Response:

What can I say, this chapter just wouldn't have been the same without your support. Thank you thank you thank you

You hang on to that thought on the record player, it'll come back around....


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