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Reviewer: Yellowberry22 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2022 10:22 am Title: The Second First Month Part One

Certainly entertaining. Remembering vividly impregnation x

Author's Response: Just don't penetrate it

Reviewer: WithaY Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2022 09:20 am Title: The Brief

Yay, you’re back! Loved this! I love that the angst in this story seems to be more about Jim and Pam’s internal dialogues and less about outside sources.

I would have loved to see Holly’s “discreet conversation” with Jim about his office conduct, lol.

Jim has been the perfect gentleman, not to mention calm in the midst of Pam’s medical crisis? Hope she come to soon because her LOC scares me! And Jim’s realization was everything! “We really should use something else.” Too late, Pam. Too late.

Love the links as always… so sweet and such a vibrant depiction of their life! Can’t wait for more soon! And isn’t Ed Sheeran amazing in person? I was just blown away. Great job!

Author's Response:

Sorry it took so long! I’ll be faster next time I hope! Twss 

Yes I really can’t do angst, so it’s really just making sure they get themselves on the right track. 

Jim’s realisation has been such a long time coming for me, so I was so happy to finally get to write it!

Ed Sheeran is absolutely amazing!! Was so so great!!

Thanks so much for the review! So happy you enjoyed this chapter! 

Reviewer: Robert Dunder Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2022 04:41 pm Title: The First Month Part Eight

Yay!! You're back! (Although this means I've procrastinated with my fic long enough for you to be finished with yours even though you took a break *suddenly has a crisis*)

Jim willing to give it all up for Pam and Pam refusing to let him is so, so them. Well, end of Season 9 them but still. It's great to see them really properly communicating and it's always nice to see Jim getting frazzled (we all know he hates that word)

"However, seeing as this is not a marriage, and is based on fornication," -- Lol. Although, to be fair to her, has a day gone by when they weren't having sex?

"No thank you," Angela replied curtly. "Veteran's day is for remembrance not sports games." ---- Ugh, Angela, You just denied us a Dwight appearance.

The ending is just amazing! I just hope Pam doesn't think he's proposing because he got her pregnant.

I'm out of jellybeans so have a hotdog on me. (That's what she said?)

Author's Response:

And I am back!! I wasn’t really gone too long, but please please write your next chapter!!! I wanna know what happens!!

Jim does indeed hate to be frazzled but I think he’s going to be in Future chapters 😬 But also yeah, I like to fix things as I go along with this, so I didn’t want Jim to have to give up anything and for Pam to want to join him with his work. And don’t worry, I think Jim will be returning the favour too 😬

And true, they have been going at it like rabbits, but it’s been needed! How else was Jim going to realise??

Dont you worry, Dwight is heading out way very soon!

So glad you liked the ending! That’s been a long time coming for me, so glad I finally got to write it!!

Thank you muchly for your hot dog!  

Reviewer: InRomanovWeTrust Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2022 03:56 pm Title: The First Month Part Eight

I KNEW IT.

Really great chapter and I hope Pam is going to be okay. Head injuries can be super serious. Better not leave us hanging for long.

Author's Response: *Insert gif of Jim and Pam at Moroccan Christamas - I knew, she knew*


New chapter is already in progress!
 
Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2022 02:26 pm Title: The First Month Part Eight

Ok so yeah I've been looking forward to this chapter. Starting out, I really like that Pam is on board with heading off with Jim. Clearly they both realize they have something special in this relationship and want to do everything they can to keep it going. The use of the canon lines from Jim saying what's important were a great way to cement that in.

I also really love that Pam is growing more into her CEO role. Starting to delegate things, telling Angela to back off when she's getting to snippy, trying to reel in Kelly. Lots of good movement there.

As a lifelong Red Sox fan I just have to say this, the Yankees? Really? Ah well, they are in New York after all.

And there's Ethan and Steve. Hooray! Nice job with that scene. Very glad I could help out. Now of course there's probable confirmation of Pam's pregnancy. Really looking forward to seeing how that will effect they dynamics they've already built up. As always, can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Ah thank you so much! I’m glad it didn’t disappoint!!

I’m glad you picked up on those canon lines. I wanted to make them support each in their jobs, but obviously put the relationship first. We’ve got more on this particular area to come!!

Also lots more on Pam in her CEO role to come. You’ve picked up on some key bits in this chapter!!

Sorry about the Yankees, to be fair, I’ve no idea what I was writing about here. Spent a lot of time googling baseball!

Thank you again for lending me Ethan and Steve! And thank you for your help! 

Now we’ve finally got there, the rest of the story can commence!!

Thanks so much for the review!!! 

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2022 02:21 pm Title: The First Month Part Eight

This ending was everything! Poor Pam getting hit with the bat, but Jim's realization was EVERYTHING! 😱

Author's Response:

I know 😬😬😬

Thanks for the review!! 

Reviewer: Yellowberry22 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2022 02:01 pm Title: The First Month Part Eight

Wowza. Ordinary-things Mommy’s? Brilliant.

Author's Response: Thanks baby

Reviewer: Robert Dunder Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2022 09:34 pm Title: The First Month Part Seven

Yay! Another update!

Jim's so cute thinking Pam's gonna break up with him. I wonder how she'll feel when she doesn't get her period the next day?

Oof, that backstory behind her engagement to Roy. "Sure, if you want," *sigh*. At least she found someone who'll treat her like she's everything (nice callback to S9 btw)

"Not my brothers or my sister, he picked me." -- Ok, I've been joking about Jim having daddy issues but he does seem like he's always yearning for his father's approval. I wonder why. And I wonder how his dad will react to an unplanned *spoiler to anyone who still doesn't get what's going to happen haha*

Jim with a helicopter. What a flex. And I wonder what's he planning to ask her? To move with him to London or LA? Away from her business? *gasps*

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hmm did she get her period though?? They seem to have been going at it like rabbits still 🤔🤭

Yeah Jim is a HELL of a lot better than Roy ever was or probably ever could be!

Jim definitely wants his father’s approval and attention, total daddy issues there. I wonder what will happen indeed 🙃

Well find out very shortly when Jim is going to ask Pam!

Thanks so much for the review and so glad you’re enjoying it! 

Reviewer: WithaY Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2022 06:44 pm Title: The Brief

Loved this as always! Even though it’s a cliffhanger, I love that they have confessed their love, especially using the great canon lines. I’m still intrigued about Pam’s cluster of “symptoms”… but I feel better about it knowing they both are seriously committed to this relationship and each other.

Jim’s work travel came out of left field, but these two can handle anything! The fall outfits were super cozy too, setting the scene!

Packer was so cringeworthy— can’t wait to see where the rest of the characters fit in! And the story of Penny was so sweet— love JAM connecting and sharing their past.

As always, fantastic work! I anxiously await the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Glad this chapter didn’t disappoint!!

Apologies for the cliffhanger! I promise I’ll update as soon as I can but it will be a little while!

And yes! Definitely wanted them committed to each other even though it’s not been that long that they’ve been together, which is kinda why these chapters have just been going on a bit more than I expected them to!

Glad you liked all the fall stuff, was a lot of fun to research all of it. Boy do I wish I could spend some time in Pound Ridge!

Lots more of your favourites coming soon, won’t be too long until we meet them!

Thanks so much for the review!! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2022 05:45 pm Title: The First Month Part Seven

Roy's bad enough but it was Dr. Packer who they went to? Eesh. I mean seriously, I get why Pam doesn't really like talking about Roy all that much. If that's what the relationship was like, looking back on it, yeah very not great.

Loved all the canon adapted lines. They fit well in everything here. That Jim is the first to confess his real feelings was great and that Pam told him she feels the same way. It's a lot of fun that they can just enjoy being in love without all the extra heartache and angst.

Lots of fun hanging out with Iz too. "Oh yeah we live in a rom com now." I mean she's not wrong. Looks like there's some pretty big things coming on the horizon. Should be really interesting to see how it all pans out.

Author's Response:

Yeah Pam’s previous relationships have just been awful, so it’s easy to see why she can’t believe Jim is a regular person and not some fairytale prince!

I don’t do angst very well, so I’m afraid it was always going to be pretty fluffy here!

Lots of big things coming (Twss) this story is far from finished….! 

Reviewer: InRomanovWeTrust Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2022 10:37 am Title: The Brief

I can’t believe you’d leave me on a cliffhanger like that. How could you do this to me???? I loved it as always, though.

Author's Response:

Hehehe 🤭 

Thanks so much! So happy you’re liking it!! 

Reviewer: Yellowberry22 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2022 12:56 am Title: The First Month Part Seven

Lovely outfits. Very extraordinary. Interesting Transport!

Author's Response: d84;a039;

Reviewer: InRomanovWeTrust Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2022 08:27 pm Title: The First Month Part Six

Such a cute chapter! Also Cathy and Karen need to stay away from Jim. Ugh. I want to beat them with a tree branch.

Author's Response:

Hahaha!! That's EXACTLY how I feel too!!

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: InRomanovWeTrust Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2022 07:05 pm Title: The First Month Part Four

Oooooh that was a super risky move on Pam’s part. I loved it though. 7278/10. Would recommend.

Author's Response:

It was!!

Thank you SO much!! Glad you're enjoying it :) 

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2022 06:31 pm Title: The First Month Part Six

Oh Cathy Cathy Cathy... what a homewrecker xD

I really enjoyed this chapter! I absolutely LOVED the pool smut (and thank you for the shout-out too ;) )

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! Sorry Pam cut it short!!

Thanks so much for the review and for your help! 

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2022 06:29 pm Title: The First Month Part Five

Wow.... Karen is... kind of a bitch

Author's Response: She really is!

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2022 06:28 pm Title: The First Month Part Four

I mean, birthday sex IS a great present... that applies to Jam too ;)

Author's Response: Haha!

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2022 06:27 pm Title: The First Month Part Three

Okay, I'm weirdly fascinated by the fact that Cathy stole the lingerie Jim bought for Pam. Like... what did she plan to do with it? Take photos of herself in it to "woo" Jim? Huh...

Author's Response: I don't think Cathy thinks through anything of what she does, in any universe 

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2022 06:25 pm Title: The First Month Part Two

He ripped her bra?! HE RIPPED HER BRA?!?!

Author's Response: He really did!

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2022 06:24 pm Title: The First Month Part One

Lol, the way their coworkers snicker over knowing they just spend the night together is hilarious!
On top of Jam having another day the next day? I'm sold

Author's Response: Glad you liked that bit! I enjoyed writing them all A LOT!

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2022 06:22 pm Title: The Date...Continued

d....did Jam just fuck on their first date?!

Author's Response: Uh, yeah they did!

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2022 06:22 pm Title: The Date...Continued

d....did Jam just fuck on their first date?!

Author's Response: Uh, yeah they did!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2022 08:37 pm Title: The First Month Part Six

More and more evidence that Pam is pregnant. Morning sickness, increased tiredness, increased sensitivity. Kinda feels like it'll take something drastic for her to wake up about it all though.

Other than that, lots of fun this time around. Loved the re-use of the Booze Cruise items. Jim using them as an opportunity to make room for Pam in his life. Very sweet. Likewise their poolside tryst, prior to Pam falling asleep that is.

I think you've got Ryan and Kelly down really well. Kelly being the over excited about everything person she is. I do wonder how the rest of her pregnancy will turn out though. Ryan being the kind of jerk about it all. He was only thinking about himself and now has to face the consequences. The fact he's basically pouting like a child reads true for me.

Cathy trying to flirt with Jim there too. Sorry Cathy, you're barking up the wrong tree. Try as you might, Jim's heart (and other body parts) is already spoken for.

I also really liked the call back to canon Halloween costumes, but elevated a bit. Great way to put a new spin on things. As always can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked the Booze Cruise list, it was a little tricky getting it to actually work!

Yeah Cathy isn't going to get anywhere quickly acting like she is, just making Jim more uncomfortable than anything! Unfortunately we've not seen the last of her!

Phew! Kelly and Ryan were fighting me in this one, so happy they came across well in the end!

Thanks so much for the review! Hope you like what's to come!! 

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2022 12:52 am Title: The First Month Part Six

Hmmm. Nauseous, with heightened emotions and sensitivity. Curious. Very curious.

Ahhhh, these kids are so cute together. And props on figuring out a way to work all of the Booze Cruise props in and make it make sense. AND the hot dog note.

Poor... I don't know who I feel worse for, Ryan or Kelly. Nope, definitely Kelly.

Please tell me Jim is going to be working with Dwight...

Author's Response:

Ah thank you! Took a little while to figure it out, the rubber soled shoes threw me a bit! But glad it worked out!

You'll just have to wait and find out what happens with Dwim!

Thanks for the review!! 

Reviewer: Robert Dunder Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2022 05:57 am Title: The First Month Part Six

I've been waiting for an update to this story and I'm not disappointed!

Nice callback to Booze Cruise. I doubt Pam will be able to get those ski lessons now since... her breasts are becoming more sensitive.

Lol, Crazy Cathy. I take it back. I hope Pam doesn't fire her because it's just funny to see her try (and fail) to make a move on Jim.

I don't think Angela's crazy on Jim, which let's face it I don't think she ever liked him in canon. Ryan and Kelly with absolutely no filter in public = AMAZING

Aww, these two totally love each other (although I'm glad neither of them are blurting out the L word, I mean it's literally been less than a month), even if Jim doesn't really like any of the shows she's watching. I found that detail to be really cute.

Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response:

Oh I’m so glad you liked it! I’m trying to get the chapters up as quick as possible, I think I need to start making them shorter 🤣

Yeah as I wrote the ski lessons, I was kinda sad that they might not happened. I’m sure Jim will have something else planned instead for Pam, don’t worry!!

Oh glad you liked the Netflix bit! I spent a good time trawling through old release dates and almost got distracted rewatching those shoes 🤣

Thanks so much for the review and jelly! 

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