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I am almost all the way caught back up with this. Each chapter seems to just become better and better.

:)

Author's Response: Oh thank you!!

Cathy, don't do whatever you're thinking about doing.

Hmmmm. Looks like there might be another baby on the way from the Athleap team...

I'm glad to see Betsy recognizing the problem here, although I'm with Jim. This is really on her husband to solve, rather than her son.

"Maybe a necklace could replace that, he thought. And then when she's nervous, she can play with that and think of me and know I'll be there to help her through whatever is troubling her." Very sweet... and I like the additional thought going into the gift.

The vastly overdone gender reveal was fun, but I've got to be honest: I don't see a bright future for Kelly and Ryan.

Author's Response:

Cathy realllllllly needs to go away. But also, we need to have a little fun first ;)

Crazy there's so many babies. What is in the water in NYC huh?? 

The necklace has been a long time coming, like 20+ chapters, so I'm glad I could finally write it! Hope it came through ok!

Yeah Kelly and Ryan, who knows where that train wreck is headed....

Thanks for the review! 

Betsy is such a sweet mum and I get that she wants her family to get along, but Gerald can do one. I hope they get it resolved but also get why Jim is being stubborn #daddyissues. Gerald needs to step up and be the supportive dad Jim has always needed.

Can totally imagine Kelly and Ryan throwing an eccentric gender reveal party and think you're spot on with how it would play out (and Kelly's outfit choice!! You are so good at this, have i told you that? Only a million times? Get used to it)

Jim's Christmas vibes are my kinda vibes! Oh my. Beautiful!!

Author's Response: Oh I adore Betsy. Or my version of Betsy haha! Yeah Gerald can totally do one. But. He does have his reasons. 

Good, exciting narrative. Decorating early… right?

Author's Response: Yes cowboy

Oh where to begin?!? I love this story so very, very much! It’s the perfect combination of everything… The Office… a rom com… an epic movie… so amazing! You do such a great job, and I hope you know how much I and others appreciate it! It makes my day to see a new update!

I love that you’re writing Karen as annoying and concerning but not catastrophic to Jam. I think as long as they’re openly communicating about her, they can handle this. It seems like Karen was a little more inundated with Jam public displays of affection so it will be different to see how she interacts with them going forward, as she hasn’t had complete confirmation or visual evidence of their relationship like she does now. I did love that she repped Here’s Chips though!

Kelly and Andy are great! I love how you write Kelly! Her canon lines come back so memorably and I loved the trash talk smack talk memories! I think there’s a lot of foreshadowing going on with a potential Athleap/Ordinary Things joint venture (or something; they’re definitely all getting friendly!) but Andy and Kelly might be a lot for CEO Jam to handle! Nellie is much for me like canon… confusingly strange but kind of endearing??

Thank you for my shout out and for differentiating between Karen and Karyn in this chapter. This public service announcement means so much to Karyns around the world! It’s an honor to get a sweet little mention in your epic novel!

Oh Pam… who DOES Karen always end up in the bathroom with you? If it happens a third time, I’ll know it’s not coincidental. I loved a much Pam’s calm demeanor with Karen this time… “We’ll Jim is welcome to go if he wants to drinks with you.” I think Karen is SO ready for Pam to flip out which would expose a weakness in the Jam relationship… but Pam is pretty chill and confident in her relationship and I love that.

I also love your callback from previous chapters as Pam tried to avoid Christian… I remember her talking to Jim about getting in house media and him offering the help— so I loved that! Agreed that Pam didn’t need that confrontation also!

I have to admit that I was fully expecting Jim to announce the pregnancy like in canon as it just slipped out… but I trust your vision in the bigger picture! That would have really set Karen reeling!

Perhaps your crown jewel was your flirty “smut for smut’s sake” ending. It was a delightful little hook up that read super sexy and sweet (Jim just wanting to go home, Pam encouraging him to network—until he got under her skin so to speak). You gave us such incredible visuals and so I can just imagine the two of them looking drop dead gorgeous in those clothes! I especially am a sucker for the leading lady to wear the gentleman’s jacket! I loved Pam letting Jum get away with murder in the car… it’s been too long for these two, hasn’t it?? I especially loved that Pam was now the one to pounce on Jim in the elevator— and his snappy comeback “We’re not going to have sex in the elevator, Pam.” Loved how the table turned on that! You ended it so cheekily with Jim honestly telling Pam that he told her he couldn’t wait! You did Jim… you did say that a couple times!

Can’t wait to see what amazing things come next… can’t wait for more holidays and sweet Jam baby stuff… looking forward to Pam’s bump and Jim’s interactions with her bump… and seeing how they navigate London, LA, Seattle, the Hamptons, and whatever you throw our way! Glad you are feeling better! You never disappoint; this story is such a gem and so are you! Much love and gratefulness as I’ve been out of jelly’s for you for quite a while missy!!

Author's Response: Honestly I don't even know where to begin with replying to this EPIC review. I think I can really only say THANK YOU SO MUCH for your kind words. I love how you get all of the references and how much you love this fic. You're the best <3

Pseudonyms, Please: Anon anon

Email: menage@trois.com

Subject: Awards Mayhem

I was at the Digital Marketing Awards. I was also nominated but lost to some bitch who freaked out on me when I offered to show her my magic trick. You never what weirdos you'll run into in these events.

I saw the CEO of Filippelli Communications, Carol something. Her eyes were glued to Jim Halbert the entire night... or was it Halpret? Whatever. She had her sights on some man candy. I don't think it ended well though. They were friendly at first. He even bought her a drink (he's a total player. the beard says it all), but then I saw him getting pissed. From what I know, he's dating this busty redhead and this Carol chick was being a complete bitch to her. So maybe he's not a player. That beard though...

I had a hangover the following day. But word around the street is Jim and the busty chick left the party early and without saying goodbye to anyone. Their driver also said he was very handsy on the ride home. The dude obviously gets a lot of action. I mean that's just unfair. No guy can be that perfect. Maybe he doesn't last long during sex.

No jellybeans still. Have a "Best Author" award on me. I better be included in your acceptance speech.

Author's Response: Your reviews continue to astound me. I’m not worthy. 

Holy crap Karen! She really is a piece of work isn't she? Forcing Jim to by her a drink. Trying to get him to cheat on Pam. Finding Pam in the bathroom like that? Just wow.

Makes me so glad that everyone was putting her right in her place. Jim, Pam, and especially Kelly. Kelly's whole piece was just a stroke of genius in tearing her down. Loved it.

A great night for them with the awards and getting all hot and bothered. Loved that they still can't keep their hands off each other. To only make in in the front door and that early in the night? Feels like it's going to a very good night going forward.

Also Warrior Media got the FDNY EMS account and Tea and Cola the Gefen Foods? Thank you. Brought a big smile to my face there. Wish I still had some jellybeans to give this story.

Author's Response:

Karen is the worst and I hate her hahahhaha! She’s definitely become quite the villain in my head canon, and it’s kinda spilling out here. Glad you liked Kelly’s take down. I adore writing for her, it’s so much fun!

Glad you enjoyed the shout out! Thank you for your continued support for this fic!! 

OMG I loved the Hogs and Fans!
It was very clever how you included our names into the chapter.
Karen is definitely living up to her name here.
I like how Pam turned the tables on her by taking Karen to see Jim at their table. For a second there I thought that they were going to tell Karen about the baby. It was good to see Jim put his foot down with Karen. However, I have a feeling that it won’t stop her
from trying again. 🤔
The smut is fun. Plus they’ve been holding out for a while now so it’s well deserved. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Oh yay!! Just a little thank you for all the support and reviews!

I really liked putting Karen in her place here, was a lot of fun. Hopefully she's getting the hint!

New chapter will hopefully be up within a week! 

Thanks again for all your reviews! 

Flippin’ amazing! Raunchy Tuna…

Author's Response: Thanks. Hope it wasn't too stinky

You never disappoint with each chapter of HD.. always something to surprise me, delight me, and make me laugh! I'm seriously committed to making this into an actual film. We're on this!

Jim is very sweet with his hot sauce gesture... and I do like the role Cathy seems to play in this fic--because much like canon, she seems to be insignificant and just borderline annoying. Yes, she doesn't do her job, which is a problem--but clearly, Jim and Pam are not threatened by her presence--and I love that. I hope that the second trimester is better for Jim and Jim's... member??? He's so patient... and calm. I hope he enjoys Pam's new "energy", because he deserves it! Also, I love that they are trying to cook! It would be so fun to see them at a cooking class, or recreating at home!

I love that Michael was the recreator of the flashing... still keeping it weird! He was very sweet in this scene, tearing up at the heartbeat, which was heartwarming. I loved some of his lines which I know I heard from canon, and his ventures to Abracadabra, who knows if we'll see some of his purchases??

I love where the Awards are--beautiful location for beautiful people! I think it's perfect for Athleap and Ordinary Things to sit together--yes, a motley crew, but setting the stage nicely for a Jam power company or a Jam joint venture perhaps? The outfits are on point, for everyone, including Angela. Sorry to hear that Dwight is experiencing problems with his burger machine.. has it been sold to companies yet? Perhaps still in the ironing out the kinks phase. Of course Pam has the most incredible outfit of all, and my favorite scene is when Kelly spots Jim and says, "Fuck me". We alone need the movie for this scene of beardy, sexy, dressed up Jim (amazing find, BTW) and a gorgeous, sexy, fashionista with a secret pregnancy Pam in that leather dress and spectacular shoes! I love that they are so comfortable together now, with sweet little moments of affection where he puts his arm around her, and the little kisses... I'm sure Karen missed them (and may I point out, she's a Karen with an E and not a Karyn with a Y, so not surprised she's our villan). But there's no mistaking that they're an item--and I like that. I'm a little concerned that their news will be aired tonight--Pam seems to be pretty intent on keeping it quiet and there are a few people in attendance who know, so it seems dangerous! Maybe Jim spills it as in canon?! Ooooh Karen's outfit... so different from Pam's... love that visual so much! Andy was so Andy in this, from the Cockney accent to forgetting his wallet... I'd almost like to see what he's wearing too! And poor Nellie and her magician phobia!

I loved the Neiman scene and it sets us up for all kind of great storyline... Jim buying Pam a Neiman? Jim taking Pam to Paris for Christmas? YES! Jim encouraging Pam's painting and more art-based side, including a nursery mural? Maybe! As usual, amazing. Perfect. My favorite! Would totally give more jellies if I could... hope my serious devotion to this epic story makes up for my lack of jellies currently! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Oh my goodness, your reviews are getting longer than the chapters!! I appreciate each and every one of them SO MUCH <3 And god, I would LOVE this to be a film!!

Thats exactly it, Cathy IS insignificant. She's just....there.

I'm sure Jam's love life will be back to normal when Pam's up to it, don't worry. Cooking class however? I'm not sure that's on their horizon!!

Oh Jam are a total power couple. I'm also in love with how they look and the hotel! Definitely not in love with Karen's outfit heheh

Ahh yes, the Neiman setup. Lots of that to come throughout the fic, so good spot!

Thank you SO much for the review! 

Ok so starting out with the spicy BJ. That made me laugh and wince at the same time. Just wow.

Sorry Cathy, you still have no chance with Jim. Thing about Pam is she needs to remember she's Cathy's boss. If Cathy is being rude, disrespectful, or not completing her assigned work there can and should be professional consequences.

Other than that, lovely to see them still being in sync with each other. I clearly remember hearing my daughter's heartbeat for the first time and yeah, it made me quite misty eyed too. Great bit of feelings there.

The gala sounds great. Jim being all debonair. Pam being all glammed up. Figured the shoe had to drop at sometime. Karen's back. With her "can't-let-go" attitude with Jim that could be interesting.

Sorry to say I wish I could add more jellybeans, but I ran out a long time ago. Here's hoping you get many more though.

Author's Response:

What's a rom com without a little laughter and wincing hey? :)

Cathy is just so terrible, Pam reallllly needs to fire her. All in good time.

We'll see how the awards go, and what Karen might try and stir up shortly!

Thank you for all the beans and support you've given this fic! 

Cathy needs to be fired.
Even if there was no Jim in Pam’s life,
Cathy is very disrespectful to her boss.
Cathy and Karen are cut from the same thirsty
cloth. They’re both so full of themselves
that they can’t see disinterest if it slapped them in the face, which is something I would love to see Pam do. I can’t wait to see their reactions to Pam being pregnant.😈 I loved Pam’s dress and shoes.
So another teapot for you 🫖
Please update soon!

Author's Response:

Cathy definitely needs to go. She's the WORST. Only closely followed by Karen

I loved Pam's clothes too. I WISH I had them!!

Thank you for the teapot :) I'm trying to get the next chapter up, but I've been sick for days, so it's slow going!!