Date: October 20, 2022 01:52 am Title: The Second Month Part Four
Great as always!!
I love to see the relation between Jim and his mom, it is a beautiful one.
And yes, I’m so ready for Christmas Jam!!
Love this fic so much!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much!! Your support and kind words are so appreciated!
Date: October 19, 2022 01:16 pm Title: The Second Month Part Four
Betsy is such a sweet mum and I get that she wants her family to get along, but Gerald can do one. I hope they get it resolved but also get why Jim is being stubborn #daddyissues. Gerald needs to step up and be the supportive dad Jim has always needed.
Can totally imagine Kelly and Ryan throwing an eccentric gender reveal party and think you're spot on with how it would play out (and Kelly's outfit choice!! You are so good at this, have i told you that? Only a million times? Get used to it)
Jim's Christmas vibes are my kinda vibes! Oh my. Beautiful!!
Author's Response: Oh I adore Betsy. Or my version of Betsy haha! Yeah Gerald can totally do one. But. He does have his reasons.
Date: October 19, 2022 09:45 am Title: The Second Month Part Four
I love that Pam is turning Jim's apartment into a Christmas wonderland. Feels like she hasn't really had the opportunity to do so as part of a couple before and so she's jumping into the deep end with it all. Jim's being a really good sport about it too.
I kinda figured Betsy would have some ulterior motives for dropping in like that. She wants to make peace. I get what Jim's saying though. The kind of "love" Gerald is giving him doesn't feel very loving. It's hard to feel like one is being supported when all one gets is side eyed condescension and constantly being made to feel like he's not good enough. However I'm also not letting Jim off the hook. He's saying that Gerald needs to be the one to change, yet he won't accept a phone call or any communication from his father. Maybe Gerald had or did have a change of mind, but with Jim unwilling to even let his father talk, it would reinforce some of the thoughts Gerald already has had. But enough about all that. The necklace is lovely as is Betsy's reaction when she found out that Jim has ring already.
Wow Ryan really is a piece of work. Assuming Jim is only there because Pam is pregnant. I get that's the only reason HE is in his "relationship" with Kelly, but still. I feel bad and I don't feel bad for Kelly. I feel bad for her that she's with Ryan. I also don't feel bad for her for clinging to Ryan when he's actively flirting with other girls at the gender reveal part for his own kids. Big red flag there that Kelly is ignoring. So we'll see how that all goes down.
More evidence to kicky Cathy to the curb too. She's not doing her job unless Jim is mentioned.
Besides all that I still adore the relationship Jim and Pam continue to build. Even though it's less than a year old, they already seem so committed to each other. Getting back to Betsy, yes Jim, pop the question! I'm sure regardless of what you do, it'll be the right moment as far as Pam is concerned.
Author's Response:
Gotta jump on board with ‘Pam loves Xmas’ so she definitely has to decorate, millionaire style!
There’s lots more to come with Jim and Gerald, but I will say they are both very stubborn when it comes to their relationship!!
Ryan and Cathy? Hate them both hahah. They are definitely the absolute villians of this fic!
Less than a year old?! We’re only just over 2 months!! Jim’s got the proposal all sorted, don’t you worry about that :)
Date: October 19, 2022 08:11 am Title: The Second Month Part Four
Good, exciting narrative. Decorating early… right?
Author's Response: Yes cowboy
Date: October 19, 2022 07:07 am Title: The Second Month Part Four
It looks like Erin is going to be a mom as well.
Ryan’s an ass as always. He’s the male version of Cathy, who needs to be fired!
Kelly really is going to be a single mother because Ryan is the type of guy that will disappear the moment he gets a chance.
The part with Jim and his mom was both sweet
and funny. Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Very eagle eyed of you there with Erin!
Ryan is a complete ass. I hate him as much as Cathy haha
I’ll get the next chapter out as soon as possible!
Date: October 11, 2022 03:19 pm Title: The Second Month Part Three
Oh where to begin?!? I love this story so very, very much! It’s the perfect combination of everything… The Office… a rom com… an epic movie… so amazing! You do such a great job, and I hope you know how much I and others appreciate it! It makes my day to see a new update!
I love that you’re writing Karen as annoying and concerning but not catastrophic to Jam. I think as long as they’re openly communicating about her, they can handle this. It seems like Karen was a little more inundated with Jam public displays of affection so it will be different to see how she interacts with them going forward, as she hasn’t had complete confirmation or visual evidence of their relationship like she does now. I did love that she repped Here’s Chips though!
Kelly and Andy are great! I love how you write Kelly! Her canon lines come back so memorably and I loved the trash talk smack talk memories! I think there’s a lot of foreshadowing going on with a potential Athleap/Ordinary Things joint venture (or something; they’re definitely all getting friendly!) but Andy and Kelly might be a lot for CEO Jam to handle! Nellie is much for me like canon… confusingly strange but kind of endearing??
Thank you for my shout out and for differentiating between Karen and Karyn in this chapter. This public service announcement means so much to Karyns around the world! It’s an honor to get a sweet little mention in your epic novel!
Oh Pam… who DOES Karen always end up in the bathroom with you? If it happens a third time, I’ll know it’s not coincidental. I loved a much Pam’s calm demeanor with Karen this time… “We’ll Jim is welcome to go if he wants to drinks with you.” I think Karen is SO ready for Pam to flip out which would expose a weakness in the Jam relationship… but Pam is pretty chill and confident in her relationship and I love that.
I also love your callback from previous chapters as Pam tried to avoid Christian… I remember her talking to Jim about getting in house media and him offering the help— so I loved that! Agreed that Pam didn’t need that confrontation also!
I have to admit that I was fully expecting Jim to announce the pregnancy like in canon as it just slipped out… but I trust your vision in the bigger picture! That would have really set Karen reeling!
Perhaps your crown jewel was your flirty “smut for smut’s sake” ending. It was a delightful little hook up that read super sexy and sweet (Jim just wanting to go home, Pam encouraging him to network—until he got under her skin so to speak). You gave us such incredible visuals and so I can just imagine the two of them looking drop dead gorgeous in those clothes! I especially am a sucker for the leading lady to wear the gentleman’s jacket! I loved Pam letting Jum get away with murder in the car… it’s been too long for these two, hasn’t it?? I especially loved that Pam was now the one to pounce on Jim in the elevator— and his snappy comeback “We’re not going to have sex in the elevator, Pam.” Loved how the table turned on that! You ended it so cheekily with Jim honestly telling Pam that he told her he couldn’t wait! You did Jim… you did say that a couple times!
Can’t wait to see what amazing things come next… can’t wait for more holidays and sweet Jam baby stuff… looking forward to Pam’s bump and Jim’s interactions with her bump… and seeing how they navigate London, LA, Seattle, the Hamptons, and whatever you throw our way! Glad you are feeling better! You never disappoint; this story is such a gem and so are you! Much love and gratefulness as I’ve been out of jelly’s for you for quite a while missy!!
Author's Response: Honestly I don't even know where to begin with replying to this EPIC review. I think I can really only say THANK YOU SO MUCH for your kind words. I love how you get all of the references and how much you love this fic. You're the best <3
Date: October 10, 2022 02:09 pm Title: The Second Month Part Three
Adding smut never hurts as far as I'm concerned...
Author's Response: Hehehe duly noted!!
Date: October 09, 2022 06:41 am Title: The Second Month Part Three
Pseudonyms, Please: Anon anon
Email: menage@trois.com
Subject: Awards Mayhem
I was at the Digital Marketing Awards. I was also nominated but lost to some bitch who freaked out on me when I offered to show her my magic trick. You never what weirdos you'll run into in these events.
I saw the CEO of Filippelli Communications, Carol something. Her eyes were glued to Jim Halbert the entire night... or was it Halpret? Whatever. She had her sights on some man candy. I don't think it ended well though. They were friendly at first. He even bought her a drink (he's a total player. the beard says it all), but then I saw him getting pissed. From what I know, he's dating this busty redhead and this Carol chick was being a complete bitch to her. So maybe he's not a player. That beard though...
I had a hangover the following day. But word around the street is Jim and the busty chick left the party early and without saying goodbye to anyone. Their driver also said he was very handsy on the ride home. The dude obviously gets a lot of action. I mean that's just unfair. No guy can be that perfect. Maybe he doesn't last long during sex.
No jellybeans still. Have a "Best Author" award on me. I better be included in your acceptance speech.
Author's Response: Your reviews continue to astound me. I’m not worthy.
Date: October 09, 2022 06:37 am Title: The Second Month Part Three
Oh, Karen. You're not quite on Cathy's level, but still. This is not a good look on you.
Humble request for Kandy endgame. The belligerent sexual tension is off the charts here. Also, really fun remixing of some great Kelly moments here.
Tea and Cola? That's me! We were ROBBED. (But seriously, thanks for the shoutout!)
Oh, these crazy kids. Good thing they don't have to worry about accidental pregnancy anymore...
Glad you're feeling better!
Author's Response:
Oh god, a Kandy endgame?! Could we do that to them? Could Andy handle Kelly and 2 babies?? I mean, I’m not sure Ryan can, but he’s in that pickle. Maybe they can have some fun as we go along, we’ll see :)
I’m sorry you didn’t win the award, but thank you for your continued support!!
Author's Response:
Oh god, a Kandy endgame?! Could we do that to them? Could Andy handle Kelly and 2 babies?? I mean, I’m not sure Ryan can, but he’s in that pickle. Maybe they can have some fun as we go along, we’ll see :)
I’m sorry you didn’t win the award, but thank you for your continued support!!
Date: October 08, 2022 07:12 pm Title: The Second Month Part Three
Holy crap Karen! She really is a piece of work isn't she? Forcing Jim to by her a drink. Trying to get him to cheat on Pam. Finding Pam in the bathroom like that? Just wow.
Makes me so glad that everyone was putting her right in her place. Jim, Pam, and especially Kelly. Kelly's whole piece was just a stroke of genius in tearing her down. Loved it.
A great night for them with the awards and getting all hot and bothered. Loved that they still can't keep their hands off each other. To only make in in the front door and that early in the night? Feels like it's going to a very good night going forward.
Also Warrior Media got the FDNY EMS account and Tea and Cola the Gefen Foods? Thank you. Brought a big smile to my face there. Wish I still had some jellybeans to give this story.
Author's Response:
Karen is the worst and I hate her hahahhaha! She’s definitely become quite the villain in my head canon, and it’s kinda spilling out here. Glad you liked Kelly’s take down. I adore writing for her, it’s so much fun!
Glad you enjoyed the shout out! Thank you for your continued support for this fic!!
Date: October 08, 2022 02:30 am Title: The Brief
Love seeing update notifications from you!! Glad you're feeling better. As always, really well written update whether you were poorly or not!
Kelly is such a good character, always having Pams back and putting Karen in her place. Go Kelly!!
Author's Response:
Ah thank you so much :)
I do have a big soft spot for Kelly in this fic!
Date: October 07, 2022 07:44 pm Title: The Second Month Part Three
OMG I loved the Hogs and Fans!
It was very clever how you included our names into the chapter.
Karen is definitely living up to her name here.
I like how Pam turned the tables on her by taking Karen to see Jim at their table. For a second there I thought that they were going to tell Karen about the baby. It was good to see Jim put his foot down with Karen. However, I have a feeling that it won’t stop her
from trying again. 🤔
The smut is fun. Plus they’ve been holding out for a while now so it’s well deserved. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Oh yay!! Just a little thank you for all the support and reviews!
I really liked putting Karen in her place here, was a lot of fun. Hopefully she's getting the hint!
New chapter will hopefully be up within a week!
Thanks again for all your reviews!
Date: October 07, 2022 05:07 pm Title: The Brief
I am really enjoying this story! Feel better!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! To both of those!
Date: October 07, 2022 02:24 pm Title: The Second Month Part Three
Flippin’ amazing! Raunchy Tuna…
Author's Response: Thanks. Hope it wasn't too stinky
Date: September 29, 2022 10:35 pm Title: The Second Month Part Two
Cannot wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Ah thank you! I'm working as quickly as I can but am sick at the moment, so it's slow going!
Date: September 28, 2022 02:45 pm Title: The Second Month Part Two
You never disappoint with each chapter of HD.. always something to surprise me, delight me, and make me laugh! I'm seriously committed to making this into an actual film. We're on this!
Jim is very sweet with his hot sauce gesture... and I do like the role Cathy seems to play in this fic--because much like canon, she seems to be insignificant and just borderline annoying. Yes, she doesn't do her job, which is a problem--but clearly, Jim and Pam are not threatened by her presence--and I love that. I hope that the second trimester is better for Jim and Jim's... member??? He's so patient... and calm. I hope he enjoys Pam's new "energy", because he deserves it! Also, I love that they are trying to cook! It would be so fun to see them at a cooking class, or recreating at home!
I love that Michael was the recreator of the flashing... still keeping it weird! He was very sweet in this scene, tearing up at the heartbeat, which was heartwarming. I loved some of his lines which I know I heard from canon, and his ventures to Abracadabra, who knows if we'll see some of his purchases??
I love where the Awards are--beautiful location for beautiful people! I think it's perfect for Athleap and Ordinary Things to sit together--yes, a motley crew, but setting the stage nicely for a Jam power company or a Jam joint venture perhaps? The outfits are on point, for everyone, including Angela. Sorry to hear that Dwight is experiencing problems with his burger machine.. has it been sold to companies yet? Perhaps still in the ironing out the kinks phase. Of course Pam has the most incredible outfit of all, and my favorite scene is when Kelly spots Jim and says, "Fuck me". We alone need the movie for this scene of beardy, sexy, dressed up Jim (amazing find, BTW) and a gorgeous, sexy, fashionista with a secret pregnancy Pam in that leather dress and spectacular shoes! I love that they are so comfortable together now, with sweet little moments of affection where he puts his arm around her, and the little kisses... I'm sure Karen missed them (and may I point out, she's a Karen with an E and not a Karyn with a Y, so not surprised she's our villan). But there's no mistaking that they're an item--and I like that. I'm a little concerned that their news will be aired tonight--Pam seems to be pretty intent on keeping it quiet and there are a few people in attendance who know, so it seems dangerous! Maybe Jim spills it as in canon?! Ooooh Karen's outfit... so different from Pam's... love that visual so much! Andy was so Andy in this, from the Cockney accent to forgetting his wallet... I'd almost like to see what he's wearing too! And poor Nellie and her magician phobia!
I loved the Neiman scene and it sets us up for all kind of great storyline... Jim buying Pam a Neiman? Jim taking Pam to Paris for Christmas? YES! Jim encouraging Pam's painting and more art-based side, including a nursery mural? Maybe! As usual, amazing. Perfect. My favorite! Would totally give more jellies if I could... hope my serious devotion to this epic story makes up for my lack of jellies currently! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Oh my goodness, your reviews are getting longer than the chapters!! I appreciate each and every one of them SO MUCH <3 And god, I would LOVE this to be a film!!
Thats exactly it, Cathy IS insignificant. She's just....there.
I'm sure Jam's love life will be back to normal when Pam's up to it, don't worry. Cooking class however? I'm not sure that's on their horizon!!
Oh Jam are a total power couple. I'm also in love with how they look and the hotel! Definitely not in love with Karen's outfit heheh
Ahh yes, the Neiman setup. Lots of that to come throughout the fic, so good spot!
Thank you SO much for the review!
Date: September 25, 2022 08:48 pm Title: The Second Month Part Two
Ugh. Cathy. Take a hint, lady.
Well. That's going to put Jim off sex for a bit. And a very sweet gesture, especially given the traumatic memories involved. Although he maybe should've anticipated this was a passing phase.
HA. Oh, Michael. That's really not a story you should be telling people.
""Pleasure to meet you little lady."
"No." Bullet dodged, Andy. That would be fun for no one.
Ugh. Karen. Speaking of people who need to take a hint.
Author's Response:
Oh god, these women all really need to take a hint don't they. Don't they know it's all about Pam?
Jim was trying his best. What's a Jim gesture if not utterly cute?
Date: September 25, 2022 04:02 pm Title: The Second Month Part Two
Ok so starting out with the spicy BJ. That made me laugh and wince at the same time. Just wow.
Sorry Cathy, you still have no chance with Jim. Thing about Pam is she needs to remember she's Cathy's boss. If Cathy is being rude, disrespectful, or not completing her assigned work there can and should be professional consequences.
Other than that, lovely to see them still being in sync with each other. I clearly remember hearing my daughter's heartbeat for the first time and yeah, it made me quite misty eyed too. Great bit of feelings there.
The gala sounds great. Jim being all debonair. Pam being all glammed up. Figured the shoe had to drop at sometime. Karen's back. With her "can't-let-go" attitude with Jim that could be interesting.
Sorry to say I wish I could add more jellybeans, but I ran out a long time ago. Here's hoping you get many more though.
Author's Response:
What's a rom com without a little laughter and wincing hey? :)
Cathy is just so terrible, Pam reallllly needs to fire her. All in good time.
We'll see how the awards go, and what Karen might try and stir up shortly!
Thank you for all the beans and support you've given this fic!
Date: September 25, 2022 11:50 am Title: The Brief
You started us off hating Cathy, and ended with us moving the mood to Karen! Such sweet jammy goodness in the middle though!
Author's Response: Eugh aren't those two just the worse. More Jam, always more jam!
Date: September 24, 2022 11:59 am Title: The Second Month Part Two
Cathy needs to be fired.
Even if there was no Jim in Pam’s life,
Cathy is very disrespectful to her boss.
Cathy and Karen are cut from the same thirsty
cloth. They’re both so full of themselves
that they can’t see disinterest if it slapped them in the face, which is something I would love to see Pam do. I can’t wait to see their reactions to Pam being pregnant.😈 I loved Pam’s dress and shoes.
So another teapot for you 🫖
Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Cathy definitely needs to go. She's the WORST. Only closely followed by Karen
I loved Pam's clothes too. I WISH I had them!!
Thank you for the teapot :) I'm trying to get the next chapter up, but I've been sick for days, so it's slow going!!
Date: September 24, 2022 09:16 am Title: The Second Month Part Two
Pseudonyms, Please: William M. Buttlicker
Email: athleap_lover@hotmail.com
Subject: Extra Spicy Tuna
Seems like little Miss CEO should be keeping an eye out for her secretary. Rumor has it that she's had her eye out for a certain daddy and she might be sending a different kind of Christmas card to him.
Speaking of hot commodities, this hotshot CEO who's friends with all these big sports names seems to be head over heels for his baby mama. Word around the street is she set his dick on fire but couldn't care less. He also sounds like a masochist since he was seen carrying a big box of hot sauce to her office. Now if that's not true love, I don't know what is.
These two lovebirds were also spotted in an expensive hospital. Now you didn't hear it from me but they got one of those crazy doctors that rich people always seem to gravitate to. Everything seems to be fine as they were seen leaving the building with happy tears in their eyes. Isn't that sweet?
I was at the annual Marketing Awards and let me tell you, little miss CEO has a lot of things to worry about. First of all, a bunch of her employees seem skeptical about Mr. Hotshot. Not the talkative one, but the one with the accent and the blonde uptight one. Little Ms. CEO may be in love with him but they're not drinking whatever Kool Aid he's offering.
You know who is though? A certain Karen who was spotted flirting with Mr. Hotshot. He should steer clear of her though. I heard she's looking to speak to the bar's manager.
That's all I have. No jellybeans but maybe Andy can give you one. But let's not kid ourselves. He'll probably pretend to almost reach for the check but Mr. Hotshot will save the day.
Author's Response:
Oh god, I don't even know how to reply to the GENIUS that is this review. I am not worthy *bows down to you*
I'm just going to leave it there, other than THANK YOU and watch out for Sunday Spotted next week...
Date: September 24, 2022 08:34 am Title: The Second Month Part Two
Spicy penis is certainly yucky!!
Author's Response: Depends who's it is
Date: September 18, 2022 06:17 pm Title: The Second Month Part One
Leave it to Angela to be more aware than what people expect. I can understand why Jim hasn’t called his dad back yet. He just needs some time. Gerald has been giving Jim mixed messages
on his career choices.
One hand Gerald is making snide comments about it, then he lectures Jim on how important his business is so Jim shouldn’t have any distractions. What is sad is that Gerald sees his family as a distraction.
I think that Pam’s situation with her dad is different
in that even though he’s distant, it’s in a different
way as Gerald is with Jim. At least Jim has a relationship with his dad. I bet Jim’s mom would love
to go to one of Pam’s dr. appointments. Plus Jim’s mom meeting Michael could be funny and interesting.
If I were Pam I would also want to hold off on telling my mom about the baby(and Jim) as well.
Please update soon.
Author's Response:
There's still so much to unpack here with Gerald, Jim hasn't got the full picture, and it's causing all the heartbreak. But yes, Pam's situation is very different. Pam will need to tell her mum soon, so we'll see how that goes!
Thanks for the review!!
Date: September 14, 2022 07:35 pm Title: The Second Month Part One
At first it felt like there was going to be some tension between them as they were walking and talking about their dads. Nice to see it resolved like that. Their dorkiness came out again there in the tub with the accidental knee to the crotch. Though it seemed like Pam was able to make up for that quite nicely.
And so now the secret is really over. Gotta say I'm impressed that Kelly held onto it for so long. And a nice bit of support from Angela too.
It starts. The cravings. The guy rushing out to fulfil them. It starts. Also nice use of Phyillis' comments about rain there too.
So they're heading off to London? Could be a lot of fun. I'm sure Pam will have a ball walking around the National Gallery along with all the other art in all the other places in the city. Looking forward to that for sure.
Author's Response:
Yeah there's a lot of daddy issues to work through here, but at least they were still able to have fun away! Despite the little accident
I'm very surprised that Kelly kept the secret for as long as she did!
Glad you liked Phyllis's lines there. I had a lot of fun with that.
There's gonna be a lot of fun in London, it's just quite a way away!!!
Thanks as always for the review!
Date: September 14, 2022 07:04 pm Title: The Brief
Again, incredible! Somehow you always manage to post these with incredible timing when I need a pick me up! I worked 16 hours yesterday and around hour 11.5 my great work peeps pushed me out of the OR to take a break at the start of a long surgery and I got to read this gem and go back refreshed!!
Firstly, I get total Notting Hill vibes… it was literally cozy personified! The snuggly cozy outfits, rainy day, cuddling on the couch—can we see a scene of Jim reading to Pam and her baby bump?!?!, hiking and discovering each other’s stories in the fall crisp air, and fluffy snowflakes are just rom com perfection!! Jim is making me nervous with not calling Gerald back… you never want to leave stuff hanging, especially when you haven’t ended things well. Still, I understand his apprehension. Also, I like how he calls Pam out too with her dad—and I’m sure there’s a lot to unpack also. Same with her mom… I do love that she feels so comfortable off the bat with Betsy though. I love that they are comfortable, mostly, with having each other to rely on and despite Jim feeling some angst, really seem to stand confident in their choices. I love that they can now be that support for the other.
The bathtub scene was adorable and then rom com cringey—poor Pam— but how have they been celibate for a week?!?!? And CEO Jim, you’ve built an astonishing company and are a bright guy— could you FaceTime into Pam’s appointment? Would be a cute callback to the “pretty girl in the computer” scene too— especially if Michael travels with Jim on the screen, lol!!! Glad to see Pam hasn’t rendered him completely impotent either 🤣🤣🤣 He wasn’t down for long!!🤣🤣🤣TWSS!! I love that the girls are all on the same page now about Pam’s pregnancy— and how sweet that she only wants Jim’s grilled cheese, not a gourmet one! Don’t worry ladies, you’ll work this all out! I loved Angela’s slight nod of confidence in Pam’s new life direction and am excited to see the crazy adventures of the Ordinary Ladies Pregnancy Edition! Great callback to the flashing too!! Love me a rainy weekend too— but Jim, a few chapters ago you told Pam you couldn’t wait to get her pickles and ice cream— so it’s Sriracha—just do it, man!! I love that Pam is starting to feel all the THINGS and gets to experience them with Jim. And London with a baby?!?! Girl, that is your SEQUEL! I’ll volunteer to do your locations/outfits/pictures research!! I’m looking forward to her bump soon— why is she so insistent on skin tight clothing?!?! It did land her Jimbo though, so I’ll allow it!
Loved this great chapter! It was awesome again on my third reread, and especially in the hospital lounge with the nursing station essential snack of graham crackers as I only packed lunch and snacks for 8 hours, not 16. I hope my team loves my dedication as much as Jim loves Pam! I think they do though… but it’s not nearly as much as I love this story!!!! 😘😘😘 You never disappoint!!! Thank you!!!
Author's Response:
Wooahhhhhh!!! This is such an epic review!! I feel it's almost longer than the chapter! So first off, THANK YOU! Glad you got something ro entertain you on your break!
So glad the coziness came across! It's always so hard to write the vibe that I have going on in my head. Love myself a rom com, and I'm just using every cliche in the book here haha!
Lots of daddy issues here for sure, and there will be lots more to come.
Fun idea for the FaceTime at the appointment Jim will miss! Also love that you remember chapters back what Jim said <3
And a London sequel? It's like you read my mind :)
Thanks SO MUCH for this epic review!! You're wonderful!!