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Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2023 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 2

Haha is this the same night as the last chapter?

Reviewer: Graceface Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2022 04:33 am Title: Chapter 2

Hahaha I loved this! Betsy is everyone's mum! Worrying over nothing and still trying to feed everyone including Jim's "one night stand".

I neeeeeed to know what the message he deleted said!

I prayed there would be more, that's why I didn't use my Jellies all in one go!

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2022 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 2

Can I just use this space as a response to your response on my first review? Because, oh. My heart.
That is all.
P.S. I loved this chapter, obviously. It was great. Dammit I already gave you all my beans

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2022 10:55 am Title: Chapter 2

First of all, I love the nicknames at the top. Mistake 1 and Mistake 2. Though I have to wonder was it Gerald or Jim that named them that? My money is on Gerald. Betsy is all sorts of motherly and lovely here. She just wants her boys to have a good meal is all. Jim deflecting what he's really up to because he'd just rather not is great too. The fact that Mark is also in the group chat and has no idea what's going on is just the most perfect little addition to all this too. Great follow up for sure.

Reviewer: WithaY Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2022 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 2

Well this is just a delightfully delicious surprise! I’m so into this… This is hilarious and so much like one of my family’s group texts! Betsy is typical mom also, using gifs and photos and emojis— why???— I don’t know, but seems to be a mom thing!! I love that Mark is a part of it too. Ohhhh Jim… basketball and beers at Poor Richard’s followed by crashing on Jason’s couch?? Is THAT what we’re calling it now??? Okay… I can just SEE him feigning innocence as he texts this… One can only imagine what that deleted text was! Love Betsy playing Mom Detective too— while also feeding her son. And Gerald… “don’t lie to your mother, son”. Oh yes… nothing more I’d rather than outing my sex life to my family chat. Love, love. Love.. and a great distraction while we wait for Mrskhalpert’s posh AU in HD!!! Please continue!! Thanks for sharing!!! You’re the best!

Author's Response: Aw mate, thank you thank you!!!!! More soon... ish. I'm a busy bee at the moment but SOON

Reviewer: InRomanovWeTrust Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2022 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 2


That’s all I have to say. At least Betsy would offer Jim’s “one night stand” food after being ravished by her son.

If I had more jellies I’d give them but I used them all last time.


Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2022 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 2

More like WHO is he doing tonight amirite?

I love the use of the comic potential of Jim living so close to his parents here.

Author's Response: hahahaha these kids and their first date shenanigans, ey?

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