1 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2022 11:32 pm Title: I'm coming apart at the seams
First off, welcome to being an official MTT author! Welcome to the club!
Now let's talk shall we because holy crap! To say your first fic is about Casino Night and then to have it go there! Bold choice for sure. I can so easily see that Pam got swept up in the torrent of emotions of the moment so she would let this happen, but then, to nod at his last question and then let him walk out the door like that? Ouch. I mean Casino Night and its aftermath are rough enough but now adding this and possibly what it all entails? This is huge. Really curious to see how it's all going to play out. Feels like there's going to be a lot of big emotions still rolling around. Great job for your first time out of the gate.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm happy to be part if the writers club! Although I'm never going to be as good as some of you on here, I feel like I'm at least not a fraud in the watercooler anymore haha
I may have started off a little strong on the storyline here, I hope I can keep it up and maybe come to some conclusion! I hope I do the little idea in my head justice and that you enjoy!
1 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2022 10:28 pm Title: I'm coming apart at the seams
WE TOOD YOU THAT YOU COULD DO IT AND THAT YOU WOULD BE AMAZING!!!!
Ugh this was gut wrenching and beautiful at the same time! I CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE.
Also, prepare to be bullied more for a new chapter.
Much love to you, dearest! AND ALL THE JELLIES I CAN GIVE FOR YOUR FIRST FIC YAAAAAAY.
Author's Response: Hahhaah Thank you so much lovely!! I wouldn't have had the courage to post anything if it hadn't been for you guys encouraging me. I'm so grateful of you all <3 Thank you!!
1 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2022 06:52 pm Title: I'm coming apart at the seams
Oh, my goodness! This was such a delight and such a bittersweet painful piece to read! You’ve truly outdone yourself with this one; And it’s only your first story! You are such a magnificent writer! I look forward, longingly, to more of this or any other such words you could put together to make another beautiful story such as this.
You are absolutely wonderful. Thank you, my dear friend. Thank you so very much.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I appreciate your love so much, really, too sweet!!
I hope I do the rest of the story justice and that you enjoy!
Date: November 26, 2022 05:57 pm Title: I'm coming apart at the seams
Please don’t leave it like that!
Jim made the big gesture to Pam,
now it’s her turn to do the same.
Can you have her go to Stamford to tell him
that she wants him too?
And then they can have sex on top of Karen’s desk. 😂
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!!
Hahha it's not quiiiite where I had this storyline going, but I'll remember the sex on Karen's desk for if I do any future fics!
1 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2022 05:53 pm Title: I'm coming apart at the seams
Appreciate you acknowledging there's a real case for Roy. It's maybe not longer a *good* case, but it exists, and its problems weren't necessarily so glaring Pam seems ridiculous for not acknowledging them before. (And also for you recognizing Pam and Jim wouldn't necessarily have thought of it as Casino Night just because it's the episode title.)
Also, umm, yikes? Ow? Them having sex AND her still rejecting him immediately after? I buy it happening the night of, but ouch. Ouch ouch ouch. I'd be very curious to see how you'd write them coming back from that, it just seems like so much more of a gut punch for Jim.
Congrats on your first post (and on jumping right in with the Casino Night rite of passage)! Looking forward to seeing more from you.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review!
I'm a big believer that Roy wasn't a bad guy, he just wasn't good for Pam. He got complacent somewhere down the road and and that's fine for some but Pam wanted more.
Hahah ow indeed! I think I may have started off too strong with the storyline in my head but it's been playing in there since I found this site so had to have a go. I'm hoping I do it justice and that you enjoy!
Thanks again!