Date: March 13, 2023 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 16
Again, you use the most profound metaphors. This one really struck me, about Jim being okay if Pam didn’t use an umbrella in the rain, that he just helped dry her off. That’s exactly what she needs— someone who will just help her, regardless of how she encounters the rain, judgment free. I’m bummed that Pam and Jim weren’t able to connect over the summer— could they have been pen pals or something??—but I am glad they are back together in class now! But the swings and the appearance of Karen are telling me this might not be as happy a reunion as I hoped for… hopefully it doesn’t slow Pam’s progress down too much!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was harsh to have them separate over the summer but I wanted to emphasize that Pam was unable to advocate that she wanted to stay connected.
Date: March 13, 2023 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 16
Again, you use the most profound metaphors. This one really struck me, about Jim being okay if Pam didn’t use an umbrella in the rain, that he just helped dry her off. That’s exactly what she needs— someone who will just help her, regardless of how she encounters the rain, judgment free. I’m bummed that Pam and Jim weren’t able to connect over the summer— could they have been pen pals or something??—but I am glad they are back together in class now! But the swings and the appearance of Karen are telling me this might not be as happy a reunion as I hoped for… hopefully it doesn’t slow Pam’s progress down too much!!
Date: March 05, 2023 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 16
Hey, have you MET second graders....there is a lot of drama! HAHAHA! Adoring this sweet story.
Author's Response: Haha, true for sure!
Date: March 05, 2023 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh I love the idea of Jim leaving a permanent mark on Pam, and the analogy of the storm here. You really have an amazing way with words!
I hate angst so much, and this is killing me!! Oh god I really can't bear to see this Pam be heartbroken. Please don't break my heart like this!! (totally understand if you have to though!)
Date: March 04, 2023 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 16
On to 2nd grade and Toby's the teacher? That could get interesting for sure. And Karen's here too and being all buddy-buddy with Jim. Not sure how this is all going to go down. Jim though seems like he's more than ready to keep being the best thing going for Pam. Very cute welcome hug and going right into a prank. Loved the little detail of Pam's shoes too.
Author's Response: Thank you! Buckle in for a whirlwind!