Date: April 01, 2023 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 21
I love Dwight. He’s just so sweet in this!! And perceptive! It’s so Dwight to distract Karen with beet stories too! And Betsy… love Betsy so much! She is parenting Jim so well! I love Pam’s courage and Jim’s return to the right thing and Dwight’s perception… this is so good. And also a nice explanation about Karen that she’s not just a bad person. Love!
Author's Response: Aw thank you! Felt Karen had more to her!
Date: March 12, 2023 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 21
Lots going on here for sure. Wow. That Dwight sees that Pam is really trying and also is doing his best to run interference against Karen is really very nice. In his own Dwight-ish way he's looking out for Pam which is really nice.
Then Jim has a few of the clouds pulled away from his face. Karen is the pretty one but is jealous that Jim would be more apt to go for someone she see as plain, like Pam. Thus all the chirps in Jim's ear. The same with Jim loathing the idea of a long talk with Karen, nice adaptation from canon. That Jim would rather be with a Pam who doesn't talk instead of Karen who talks all the time is telling as well.
Really nice to see more and more progress from Pam. Her courage is building now that she realizes there are people out there other than family who will be in her corner. Lovely to see.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It’s so fun to put in small hints to the show.
1 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2023 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 21
*CHEERS AND OVATION!!*
You captures how I felt when I was in my first art gallery and I love that! You can read brushstrokes and lines and understand the artist and the message they covey without any words …. LOVED THIS!!!
I am so very excited to see where this is going!!
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! Art has always been a huge comfort and method of using me voice when it seems too hard, so I really enjoyed putting it into words!
Date: March 11, 2023 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 21
Another awesome chapter. And no, youve not been too harsh with Karen, I could totally see how acting like this. Love Dwight in this. And Jim having the best bus ride of his life? Heart eye emojis all round
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad y’all are ok with Karen haha!