Date: March 24, 2023 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 26
Yay! Little Pam progress! I like 'the reception of her busy mind' nice link. I love the pace of Pam's progress as its not a sudden 'oh she's all better' but a realistic journey of her learning to cope.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hoping to make it realistic!
Date: March 24, 2023 06:22 am Title: Chapter 26
Loved the use of the speed limit metaphor to start out with. I've often found people having anxiety issues to say they feel like their thoughts are racing ahead at 10,000,000,000 miles an hour which only makes their anxiety worse. For Pam to have Jim stand up for her like this and bring her thoughts to down to a normal speed was a great way to picture things. Same with the lifeboat image. The thing about a lifeboat is that yes, it can still be tossed around by wind and wave, but it can set its own coarse and move on its own to safety by its own oars or or motor. It's a chance for self rescue that's a much better chance than hanging on to a life ring or piece of debris. That lighthouse I talked about a while back feels like its getting bigger on the horizon.
Jim's view of chances is refreshing too. Feels like an extension of him telling Pam she needs to take a chance on something sometime from canon. Goes over better here too.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I always look forward to your thoughtful comments! Thank you!!
Date: March 23, 2023 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 26
Definitely still enjoying your wonderful story! You write it so beautifully. Don’t apologise for any mistakes! But if you do want a beta, feel free to give me a shout on Discord and I’d be happy to help!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much, that is so kind! So glad you are enjoying it still!
1 [Report This]Date: March 23, 2023 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 26
He is SUPER brave, and SUPER sweet and SUPER kind.... I just adore this classroom and your world....I want to go and read stories to these littles!
Author's Response: Aw! Im so glad! I love writing sweet Jim