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Reviewer: Yeza Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2023 06:44 am Title: Chapter 1

Yes. We were left wanting to see these two dance at Phyllis' wedding, although I think if they had, Karen would have been history before the end of the season. You brought this fantasy to life perfectly, so thank you for that.

Author's Response: I'm sure she really would have been out the picture way before the season ended if Jam had shared a dance then! Thank you for the review :) 

Reviewer: WithaY Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 25, 2023 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is how Phyllis’s wedding should have ended!! I love this idea of Jim asking Pam to dance too.. and the entire world just falling away except them! Of course, it’s a very Katy-like breakup for Jim and Karen here, but nothing can stop Jam’s true love. Their champagne out the back door date is also very sweet and so them. I can just see them and Pam in her beautiful brown dress… such sweet images come to mind! I love the added humor at the end too with Dwangela! Great work! Can’t wait to read more of your writing!!

Author's Response: The beauty of fic is just changing a moment and letting it blossom! I figured the world around them would just disappear with so much emotion in the moment when they had been through all of what they had. Glad you enjoyed, thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: New Hogfan Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2023 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

So is there going to be another chapter?
I’m curious since Jim saw Kate at the bar with Roy,
and knowing how vindictive Karen is and and impulsive Roy can be it wouldn’t surprise me if he tried to attack Jim at the wedding causing a scene.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I did consider another chapter but I wanted to keep this fluffy and focused on an opportunity for them to reconcile and be honest with each other. There were discussions and ideas around Karen and Roy and I totally agree there would likely be some kind of scene, but I decided I didn't want that as part of this particular story :) 

Reviewer: Graceface Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2023 08:49 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, this was wonderful!

You wrote everyone so believably, giving the feeling that it could well have been filmed as an alternate ending. This is the way this episode SHOULD have happened!

Love a fixer fic when they are done well and this was just that!

Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad it felt believable, I didn't want to stray too far... I may be biased but I would have much enjoyed this ending! 

Reviewer: Robert Dunder Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2023 03:31 am Title: Chapter 1

This is so cute and their talk had all these kinds of feels. Kinda feel bad for Karen though but it was bound to happen. Good job on this one!

Author's Response: Thank you! I figured given neither of them were ready for this turn of events they'd just have so many feelings and wanted the reader to feel the feels too. 

Reviewer: AmeliaHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2023 05:51 am Title: Chapter 1

I would have loved that to have been the way… how marvelously sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you! I sure wish the episode had been this fluffy! 

Reviewer: maryc Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2023 02:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Love fluffy JAM, so thanks for this wonderful story! Goodness that wedding was heartbreaking for all JAM lovers, and you just fixed it with this story. Can I have more please?

Author's Response: Thank you! It really was, so it was so much fun to dive in and reconstruct the moment. I do have more trippy time travellers up my sleeve! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2023 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

So this is just delightful. Jim finding the courage to ask Pam to dance, Pam finding the courage to accept. Them both realizing that they belong in each other's arms. Beautiful. Yeah kind of a hard conversation with Karen, but the truth hurts. Still he owned up to his own parts in everything. It stings for Karen of course, but there's no way it wouldn't at that point.

Then Jim and Pam finally get on the same page about everything. Excellent. And then they seal everything with some cute kisses that have some steam simmering under them. I've got a feeling they'll both have a much better night going home with the right person this time around. And even getting a little Dwangela fun in there too.

Great job with this one. I loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you! It was nice to give them a chance to not hold back so much and just let them feel the feelings rather than tamp them down for once. Jim knew what he was doing so I figured when he got to that conversation he felt he owed her the honest version of things at last. I am sure they will have a far better night together... and I really enjoyed the little Dwight and Angela dance so wanted them to be the ones to bring us full circle! 

Reviewer: InRomanovWeTrust Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2023 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Omg it’s
It’s perfect. Better than I could have imagined. I’m glad we could bully you into this.
Have all the jellies!

Author's Response: Thanks! I really enjoyed diving right into this and picking up from a specific moment in the episode to weave the idea in. A good time traveller trip up!

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2023 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh I loved this, it was the perfect fix it for Phyllis’s wedding!
The break up scene was spot on perfect. Actually, all your dialogue in this was just so canon like. Really felt like it could have been what happened.
Loved the little bit with Dwight and Angela getting caught, nice to weave that little bit of canon with their dance in there.
Awesome job. Can’t wait for the next one of these!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! It was definitely fun to reimagine the episode. Wanted Angela and Dwight to circle it back to the episode! 

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