Date: May 29, 2023 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so so great! You really nailed all the characters. Also, I think this is exactly how Roy would have reacted when he found out Pam gave away the iPod.
Awesome job with this. Please don't apologise for you English at all, it was all really good and I'm just in awe of anyone that can write so well in another language!!
Date: May 27, 2023 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, Roy does not come across looking good here. Basically saying he's going to steal Pam's iPod to give her the cheap kind. Then getting all sorts of bent out of shape when she traded for the teapot.
I do kind of like the fact Jim was ready to come in and intervene. It probably wouldn't have ended well, but I like seeing some courage on his part. Really good to see.
I also really liked that Pam called out Darryl. She's right. Roy was drunk on company property and it was not only allowed but encouraged by Darryl. That's a huge liability. Really good to see Pam taking control like this. Then to the bathroom to re-group and also telling others to back off a bit. She needs some space for herself and she lets them know. Good job Pam!
Really looking forward to seeing how this all turns out.