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Reviewer: Robert Dunder Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2024 08:38 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh God. You brought the chef into this world. I guess this fic is the most appropriate place to put him in. Maybe he should make a cameo appearance.

Jim Halpert (he/him) must have loved that book so much that he didn’t notice someone was drawing her.

Angela is that friend who’ll give you right advice at the wrong time. That “dog-loving hussy” bit made me laugh. I’d call her that too for trying to make Cat-urday a thing.

Have a jellybean. And a McFlurry. It’s probably the wrong flavor.

Author's Response: Too bad the McFlurry's the wrong flavor. Of course I brought the chef into this world, as if I could resist! Angela is the best and worst roommate to have. 

Reviewer: Graceface Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2023 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love this already! The idea of a modern day teen Jam is amazing! Already need Roy out of the picture with the bits of info on him we have so far! Pam can do better! Her being flustered by Jim was all kinda of funny/adorable! You've rocked this so far, can't wait for more! Xx

Author's Response: Thank you! So much fun to write a modern teen Jam and put them through the highs and lows of college life... even though it includes Roy! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2023 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 2

So it seems like Pam and Roy are kind of a thing, but he's not around very much and is already starting to blow her off. The fact that Pam's mind is also wandering away from Roy adds to this. If she was in a really good relationship with her guy, why all the thoughts of Jim and sexy chef? Just my take on it.

Anyway, kind of fun to see into her world here. The clandestine artist. The budding friendship with Jim. How she views her friends. I also really like it that she has some close girl friends. Hopefully they'll be able to provide some perspective as everything unfolds.

Author's Response: Yes, it's been fun to paint a picture of their relationship before introducing Roy and interacting with him. We don't get to see much of Pam's friendships in the show so its a great space to explore them here, especially in college at an age where every decision feels so big. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: grc73 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2023 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

Boooo - Roy needs to go already and we’ve not even gotten to him yet! That was a fun chapter, looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I feel that way about Roy too, and its fun dropping in hints of the state of the relationship before he's shown up in the fic. 

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2023 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

Marina is baaaaackkkk!!! I feel she's gonna be a great influence in this fic.
Also, sexy chef yayyyyy!!! Also, another great influence
Love the Jam interaction here and how flustered Pam already is by Jim.
Can't wait for more old chap

Author's Response: She sure is back! Much fun was had adding in sexy chef. Maybe he'll feature again. Who knows? Thank you kindly good sir. 

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