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Reviewer: Robert Dunder Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2024 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 3

Pam Beesly, Post Malone fan? We all stan.

Creed being a ‘mature’ student? Love it.

Roy though. We don’t stan that kind that of behavior. Although, it’ll be funny if Pam gets stood up again.

Have a jellybean coated in Jello.

Author's Response: We love a bit of Postie! Creed is absolutely more of a mature student than he says he is... age wise of course. 

Reviewer: InRomanovWeTrust Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 04, 2024 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 3

“When the sounds of Post Malone filled her ears, she gave an approving nod and started to make her way back.”

BIIIIIITCH YOU KNOW I ZEROED IN ON THAT.


Anyway, super cute chapter! But I wish Pam would cut her loses already and dump Roy. He ain’t worth it boo.

Author's Response: Hahaha it had to be Post Malone! He really ain't, but no worries she'll get there at some point...

Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15, 2023 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

Very funny ending. Roy's reaction to missing a date was great as well. I was also reminded of Pam's giddy reaction to jim playing basketball in Season 1. Interested to see where this will go next.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad it reminded you of that, I try to link in bits from the show in little ways to have that connection to the original material. 

Reviewer: afox Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2023 02:54 am Title: Chapter 3

Im so glad you uodated this! Cant wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully not too long for another update :) 

Reviewer: Graceface Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2023 04:23 am Title: Chapter 3

I've said it before and I'll say it again, ROY SUCKS. I hope Pam gets her own back. Loved this update, thank you! More please! Xx

Author's Response: Thanks for the review - completely agree, he sucks!! 

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2023 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 3

Well obviously I loved this, but oh my god, Pam's pets names I FREAKING LOVE THOSE.
Biggest question of this whole chapter that I need immediately answered: did Jim view her story!?
Of course Pam was listening to Posty. What a queen. What a king.
I reallllllly wanted to shake the pair of them while they were sat on the bench, thank god for their hug.
You've said it won't be long til the next update, so I'm going to hold you to that. CAN'T WAIT!

Author's Response:

I just had to add Mitchell in once I decided on Joni! Yep, Jim saw her story. Hope that helps you sleep at night. I too wanted to shake them, but they gotta live through their college-angst-naive-stubborn-thinktheyknowbestcostheythinktheyregrownup era. Also apologies for forgetting to give you credit for the jello and getting me out of stuck mode. Absolutely inspired.  

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24, 2023 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 3

Trust your friends and trust your gut Pam! Roy's not worth it. Can't remember you have a date, can't remember your favorite coffee, he's not worth it. Especially when you're hitting it off so well with Jim.

Lots of fun to see some show elements like the jello prank show up too. Clearly she's got Jim on the mind and he's got her on his mind too. Hope that keeps going once she finally realizes that Roy is a dead end.

Author's Response:

I'm yelling pretty much the same at Pam while I write her! But we all know back in college you think you're grown up and know whats best and that you don't need your friends telling you what to do, so Pam needs to get through that phase. I have to give some credit to MrsK for the jello, she got me out of a 'stuck' moment! Thanks for the review :)  

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