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Reviewer: Robert Dunder Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2024 07:04 am Title: Chapter 4

Pam should probably wrap her bed in plastic. Who knows what sort of things happen when she's not there and Angela is.

Roy is the king of bad timing. If he just waited two more days to go to the grocery, maybe Pam would have actually considered breaking up with him. But maybe he'll change in this next day. Right?

Here's a jellybean.
I don't know how haikus work
Wait, did I make one?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review,

I guess we're haikuists now.

Yay for jelly beans!

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2023 09:56 am Title: Chapter 4

Damn you know how to write a haiku. The butterfly one? A-mazing
You totally nailed Angela (twss) and I loved the use of the 'Jim's my friend, apparently' just works so perfectly
Ugh Roy is SUCH a tool here. I can't wait til Pam kicks him to the curb
Please update immediately. Thanking you graciously old chap

Author's Response: Why thank you kind sir. I watched that episode while writing this chapter and I was like oh my God, perfect. Roy is being an absolute spanner but we shall see where things go soon-ish! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2023 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 4

I hate how Roy's stringing Pam along like this. Like she's just something for him to use when it's convenient for him. He gets to put in almost zero effort and still gets all the rewards. That really irks me. Is it wrong for me to hope that this lunch date goes bad in someway shape or form for Pam to finally see what a tool Roy is?

Interesting that Pam thinks how nice it is to feel wanted. She gets the same kind of attention from a much nicer source and it even gives her better feelings. Seriously one of her friends needs to just tell it to her straight. Roy is a loser and she's got the potential for something so much more. That she's lying about the intent of her pupil poem and justifying her private one speaks to how her mind is going for sure. Really hoping she sees all this sometime soon.

Author's Response: Definitely a thumbs down for Roy's behaviour here! They are both just taking the easy route with the relationship right now, but no fear, things will soon be addressed between these two. Pam sure has the potential for more, her different art forms are a little source of processing all these ideas and feelings in her young age. Thanks for the review! 

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