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Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2024 01:30 am Title: Chapter 5

Jim gets a taste hehehe that already got me laughing
Love Mark and Marina already hitting it off. I'm expecting a double date by the end of this fic please
I love love love all the art description here, and this line 'He looked entirely enthralled and for a moment Pam's world consisted of only her, Jim, and the way his amazement at her art made her feel' my god it got me
And Jim in a grey sweatshirt, more of that please
And absolutely am expecting a kiss in the dark room now, don't you dare disappointment me
AND SHE'S NOT ON HER OWN ANYMORE gahhhh!!
Loved it all

Author's Response: Many thanks! Glad the importance of her art is coming through. Grey sweatshirt, what next I wonder? Maybe there'll be a dark room kiss, maybe there won't, we'll see what these two get up to. 

Reviewer: InRomanovWeTrust Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04, 2024 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 5

Love it! 🩷🩷🩷🩷
Keep them coming, bbygirl.

Author's Response: Thanks homegirl! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04, 2024 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 5

I love that Jim and Pam are still hitting it off so well. And that their friends are encouraging things along. Listen to your friends! They know what's good for you! Jim wanting to explore Pam's art and her world of art is amazing. We can tell just how much it means to her to have someone show such genuine interest. I have this mental picture of her just glowing while showing Jim all these parts of her. And not just because of all the blushing. Here's a guy who's found her golden nugget and sees her for it. Not just something in passing to deal with, but a wonderful and unique thing about her that is a large part of what makes her, her. Really looking to see how those feelings develop.

The first hints from Pam's thoughts that she's outlived her relationship with Roy. Yes she's known him, but more and more it's becoming clear that their paths are diverging. Nice to see that she's starting to see that. Still some fear of the unknown of course, but she also is realizing she's not alone which could offset a lot of those fears. Love it. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Yes, it's definitely handy that they have friends encouraging them along here! I am glad that came across, how important it was for Pam to have someone who appreciated her art so much - not because they have to because they're family/a friend. 

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