Date: March 29, 2024 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
This was a very nice Christmas fic. I like Hunter and how she voices some of Pam's inner thoughts.
Kudos!
Author's Response: It was fun to bring in a new perspective for sure. Glad you like it all. Thank you!
1 [Report This]Date: March 22, 2024 05:13 am Title: Chapter 3
Nice to get a last chapter for this one. I can picture and hear the oral diary entries - nice way to have them express some feelings to each other under the guise of play. Got some strong butterfly on my shoulder vibes in the closing scene of that paragraph.
Now the Roy's sister angle is not one I've seen done, but would make sense (like how she's slightly estranged from her selfish family) and like how you wrote it.
And here's where the one room/one bed plot pays off - nice way to end this one (while having her have some space and time in the relationship at large).
Author's Response: Jim and Pam almost always have fun together. So the fake journal entries seemed a great way to explore that. Glad you liked them. I've toyed with bringing in the idea that Roy's sister doesn't approve of Roy in the past. I'm glad it landed well with you. Same with the ending of this one. After a decent amount of soul searching, why not just reach out for what you really want? Life's short, eat dessert first. Wonderful to hear from you as always.
1 [Report This]Date: March 20, 2024 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
Glad they got their Happy Christmas ending! And well done on getting all your words in! A belated Merry Christmas to you :)
Author's Response:
It wouldn't be a good Christmas story without a happy ending. Glad you liked it.
Date: March 19, 2024 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
Reading about Roy’s history with his family certainly explains his behavior in his relationship with Pam,
and his shock over the fact that she actually dumped him. His ego is in shock. I like his sister and can understand why she distanced herself from that toxic family. I think it’s smart for Pam to want to take her relationship with Jim slow even though she confessed her feelings to him. I think she does need some time on her own before she moves in with another guy. Please update soon because I’m curious about what is going to happen when they go back to Scranton and Pam goes over to Roy’s with Hunter.
Author's Response: As always I appreciate your detailed comments. Lots of growth for Pam here that's for sure. I also wanted to add in some hope that though Roy is a bit of an oaf, with a bit of straight talk from his sister, he can turn things around. Also we have come to the end of this story. I'll leave it up to your imagination as to how things unfold from here. For now though we can leave Jim and Pam to enjoy their last night in the cabin. Thanks for the review.