Reviews For December 23rd
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Reviewer: grc73 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2023 12:02 pm Title: Dinner for... seven?

Now I've finished my own story I can finally read other people's! I love this first chapter, you've captured Pam's internal conflict beautifully.

Reviewer: New Hogfan Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2023 05:59 am Title: Dinner for... seven?

Very interesting start!
It doesn’t surprise at all that Roy
would stand up Pam even though
it was his idea to have a nice dinner.
A lot of people on social media love to trash on Pam for kissing Jim and flirting with him while they ignore Roy’s own behavior.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Not surprising at all, and not surprising that Pam would hope for the best year after year (almost like routine at that point!) For sure - they both play their parts! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2023 04:55 pm Title: Dinner for... seven?

Good god! How in the world did Pam not see that huge red flag just billowing in the breeze like that? If it had been the first time, that would have been one thing, but after several years of ditching her in and around Christmas? Holy crap! Roy is just the worst here.

Lovely timing, for once this early in the canon timeline, that Jim and the Halperts were there. Clearly Pam just started to shine as soon as she sat down with them. Taking off her ring like that though is very telling about her state of mind. As we know, she'll get there in the end, but a little melancholy when we fast forward through what we know canon holds for them.

Looking forward to more for sure!

Author's Response: I think Pam learned to put up with a lot from Roy, but it does serve as a handy catalyst in this story! It's interesting to have them come into the story this early, but also gives Pam the realisation that she can be who she wants to be in this new situation - and she knows Jim won't hold her back from being herself, so feels a bit more comfortable. Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2023 03:25 pm Title: Dinner for... seven?

BETSYYYY you know I love her!
Sneaky Beesly taking off her ring, but yaasss love it
Keep it coming you keen crab. Can’t wait for more

Author's Response: Why thank you kindly old Pingu! She's sneaky but she's gotta take a chance on something sometime...

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