Reviews For December 23rd
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Reviewer: InRomanovWeTrust Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2024 04:44 pm Title: The opposite of Larisa's ex-boyfriend

My dear this was such a treat! Would you believe that I JUST got off the phone with the Louvre, for MrsK’s story, in which I was on hold FORVER, but now I’m going to have to go through all of that AGAIN, just for you and this story? I hope you know how much that means I love you… I hate the French. 😭

I liked all of the originality you brought to this. Not just the same old rehashed timelines from actual canon, but still kept it as something that felt like real moments from the show. Wonderful. Beautiful. Gorgeous.

Author's Response: Why thank you! Such high praise. Can't wait for all our exhibits to be next to each others. 

Reviewer: grc73 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2023 12:56 pm Title: The opposite of Larisa's ex-boyfriend

That was an absolutely joy to read, a lovely story and I loved that it was true to canon, too!

Author's Response: Thank you! :) 

Reviewer: Graceface Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2023 01:41 am Title: The opposite of Larisa's ex-boyfriend

This was just amazing! Loved it so much. So believable of Jim's family to welcome Pam to their meal like that and for her to fit in so perfectly straight away like she always has with Jim, chefs kiss. The fact that she KISSED HIM I was like WHATTTT!! How could he deny something between them after that, true oblivious Jim fashion I guess. Everything about this was perfect, thank you for the Christmas treat! Sad it's over but thoroughly enjoyed xx

Author's Response: Thank you! He was of course oblivious to everything despite the kiss, maybe a little frazzled even, but they get there eventually. I was like of course the Halpert family would welcome her right in! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 26, 2023 06:05 pm Title: The opposite of Larisa's ex-boyfriend

So that was fun. Larissa explaining it all, and winning the bet. Lovely to see how Pam has now grown so much that she's willing to be open about everything. The Pam from the first chapter would have clammed up in red faced embarrassment for sure. However now that she and Jim are fully together and she's grown so much as a person, she can be honest with everything. Loved it.

Tons of great Halpert family banter as well. The silent scheming about how they're all going to prank each other was just a hoot. Even more that Pam's going to be right in the middle of it all. Great stuff for sure.

Thanks for bringing this on in for a landing. Lots of fun moments through it all.

Merry Christmas.

Author's Response: Thank you and hope you've had a lovely Christmas! I am glad you could see Pam's growth here, especially as I didn't write quite as much of her as I had in previous chapters. I wanted the reactions she did have to show her progress and evidence Larisa's decision that Pam hadn't been ready previously to be confronted about her engagement ring. Always fun to write the Halpert family and the dynamics between them all. Thanks for reading along and reviewing! 

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 26, 2023 02:17 pm Title: The opposite of Larisa's ex-boyfriend

Ok this was just perfect. Absolutely loved it all. I love your Larisa and how devious she is. Feels exactly like how Jim's sister should be.
Betsy getting sucked into the story that she already knew was hilarious. And Tom and Pete were just perfect.
Sad to see this finished but excited for everything else you have to write!!

Author's Response: Thank you kindly old sir. I think Larisa has been one of my favs to write - like Betsy she's mischievous but thrives on being a bossy boots. Jim got the mischief part! Tom and Pete being annoying but then being in on getting Pam to join the Betsy prank just felt so... Tom and Pete. Thanks for reading along and for helping when I got stuck!

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