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Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2024 05:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Using Jim's sister as a sounding board for Pam was an excellent idea. One of the more original twists on Casino Night, and makes me want to rewatch that legendary episode. Great work!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2024 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great bit of introspection there at the start. Pam is obviously reeling from what Jim just told her. You really got the whole head spinning in a thousand different directions feel of things.

Good for her to take an honest look at her relationships with the two men in her life. How she's better apart from Roy than with him, and that she's really only still there due to familiarity and length of relationship. Same for how Jim fills up her day.

I really like that she calls Larissa. You gave Larissa just enough moxie to give Pam the kick in the pants she needed. At the same time Larissa was a great sounding board for all the thoughts going through Pam's mind. I've said for a long time that if Jim and Pam had just gotten some more perspective on things, they would avoided all the drama and angst of S3. Really glad we got that here.

The kiss and aftermath were so much easier this time around. Great use of the canon lines but with different context. Jim can easily walk away this time knowing there's something there to wait for. The reward there at the end just proves that. I also really like that Pam took some time for herself before jumping in with Jim. Good for her. Take time to heal from what was a big part of her life.

Great job with this fixit. I enjoyed it all.

Reviewer: Graceface Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2024 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

'Just okay', my backside!! This was fantastic! Loved your 23rd Dec so this little followup of the in-between was just much loved! Thank you for this sweet little treat it was very tasty!

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2024 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Kissing in a lavender hallway?? Cuuuuuteee! Love it. Loved it all!
Love me a fix it fic and this was top notch!
And Larisa is fast becoming my 2nd favourite Halpert (move over Betsy) Can't wait to see her in more fics of yours!
Toodle pip good sir

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