Reviews For Eye of the Storm
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Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2009 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

that was great! go jim!

Reviewer: office_romance Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2007 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

AWW!!! I love this!!! Why couldn't this have happened?!? Beautifully written xoxoxo!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!!  I'm so glad you liked it! 

I know.  Why couldn't it????

Reviewer: beatlesxmania Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Beautifully written. I liked the fact that you made it raining, and in the end when Pam said that she was warm, safe, and comfortable even though she was drenched? Perfect. Absolutely perfect. I liked Pam's monologue, and the Oompa Loompa comment.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much beatlesxmania!  I love hearing about stories that I wrote what seems like years ago.

I'm a sucker for Jim and Pam kissing in the rain.  Thank you so much for the kind review!

Reviewer: shannanagin Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2006 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

I don't know why but the image of Jim and Pam kissing in the rain is so absolutely beautiful to me. Loved it.

Author's Response: Apparently meeeee too. Since I've already had them do that twice. LOL! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2006 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved the line "I am so not going down the aisle looking like an Oompa Loompa". Great story, loved the ending.

Author's Response: heehee. Thank you!

Reviewer: agd300 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2006 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awww... you would have gotten a 10 expect you mentioned "steamier" so you lose a point... hehehe... J/K... loved the story. I'm definitely a fan!

Author's Response: Hey I totally expected some hot story about them kissing in the rain to come out when I sat down. This is what came out. I'm thinking steamy for the road trip challenge if that makes you feel better. LOL! Thanks again!

Reviewer: swestworld Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2006 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, wow. Lovely.

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2006 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

*melts*

So, so, so good. Just gorgeous, and true, and jamalicious. You rock :)

Author's Response: So, so, so glad you liked it! And I'm glad you think I rock! ;) I'm getting really nervous lately. I'm scared about what I'm reading about S3. I am 99.9% sure that this type of ending is just a dream. We shall see..

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2006 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a great one-shot! I loved the inner debate Pam had going on in the church.

Author's Response: Thank you. I usually think I suck at one shots - but I was very happy with this one.

Reviewer: aurorabora Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2006 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

*sigh* Will you marry me?

Author's Response: Is your name Jim Halpert? If so - absolutely. ;)

Reviewer: soxgirl0545 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2006 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Beautifully written. I loved Pam's inner monologue.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

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