Date: January 03, 2007 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautifully written. I liked the fact that you made it raining, and in the end when Pam said that she was warm, safe, and comfortable even though she was drenched? Perfect. Absolutely perfect. I liked Pam's monologue, and the Oompa Loompa comment.
Thank you so much beatlesxmania! I love hearing about stories that I wrote what seems like years ago.
I'm a sucker for Jim and Pam kissing in the rain. Thank you so much for the kind review!
Date: July 15, 2006 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't know why but the image of Jim and Pam kissing in the rain is so absolutely beautiful to me. Loved it.
Author's Response: Apparently meeeee too. Since I've already had them do that twice. LOL! Glad you liked it.
Date: July 14, 2006 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww... you would have gotten a 10 expect you mentioned "steamier" so you lose a point... hehehe... J/K... loved the story. I'm definitely a fan!
Author's Response: Hey I totally expected some hot story about them kissing in the rain to come out when I sat down. This is what came out. I'm thinking steamy for the road trip challenge if that makes you feel better. LOL! Thanks again!
Date: July 14, 2006 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
So, so, so good. Just gorgeous, and true, and jamalicious. You rock :)
Author's Response: So, so, so glad you liked it! And I'm glad you think I rock! ;) I'm getting really nervous lately. I'm scared about what I'm reading about S3. I am 99.9% sure that this type of ending is just a dream. We shall see..
Date: July 14, 2006 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautifully written. I loved Pam's inner monologue.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.