Reviews For A Good Year
Reviewer: gotkona Signed 
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Date: November 20, 2006 10:07 am Title: January
8 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 10:07 am Title: January
sounds interesting so far.
Reviewer: Semby Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: November 20, 2006 08:51 am Title: January
Author's Response: I know, that bugged me too, but I did it at 2am, and for some reason wanted to really get it out. I promise the tenses will be the same from now on.
6 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 08:51 am Title: January
This was a great start! You've really got all the characters' voices down.
If you don't mind a teeny bit of constructive criticism: I noticed that while most of this is in the past tense, you slipped into present tense a few times. Also, in Angela's talking head, where you used "in promptu" I think you meant "impromptu"
Author's Response: I know, that bugged me too, but I did it at 2am, and for some reason wanted to really get it out. I promise the tenses will be the same from now on.
Reviewer: Winky Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: November 20, 2006 06:25 am Title: January
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 06:25 am Title: January
Awww. I seriously cried there. You are amazing. Man, if I were Pam, it'd have kicked Jim's indecisive butt by now. But, luckily...Anyway, you're fantastic. Never stop!