Date: November 28, 2006 07:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Yes, yes, yes. I loved this story. I'd love for you to continue it -- I'd love to know how Karen reacted -- can you just imagine what she must have been thinking? Somehow, I picture her coming after him right after the elevator doors closed, going "What the fuck was that, Jim?" Ooooh, you know there's some major tension there!! I also agree that the last line - was BRILLANT. It's so true. Fight ... fight ... fight ...
Author's Response:
Yes, if I were Karen, I would be rather livid at something like that. And I would also pay money to see the look on Pam's face if Jim said those words to her - heh heh heh...
Thanks as always for the review!
Author's Response:
Yes, if I were Karen, I would be rather livid at something like that. And I would also pay money to see the look on Pam's face if Jim said those words to her - heh heh heh...
Thanks as always for the review!
Date: November 28, 2006 07:30 am Title: Chapter 1
This was the hinge of this story to me: “Are you serious? You’re really going to do this?” And if there is more, you are killing me with this cliffhanger! (Oh I hope there is more!!!)
Author's Response:
I know - I really would like to see him just ask her point blank why she's still running. Sigh.
Fear not - I think I'm gonna write more!
Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 06:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. All I could think of when Pam saw Jim and Karen sharing that kiss was "Ouch!" I would love to see something like this on the show- Pam catching Jim and Karen sharing a sweet moment, which makes Pam cry, so she runs away and Jim goes after her, and conflict ensues. But in my head that's where they start to actually talk to each other. hehe.
Anyway, awesome story!
Author's Response:
I'd love to see it on the show, too - or just a variation of it would do. She wouldn't even have to run away all dramatically as she did here; I just want Jim to catch her with that sucker-punched expression on her face....
Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 05:59 am Title: Chapter 1
You're like a stealth poster! Well, yum. Sexy, fed-up, angry Jim. You must explore this further...I command you to write more chapters. (Okay, so I have no actual power, but you get the idea.)
Would love to see what you'd do with an actual drabble - always interesting to see what writers do when working 'against type.' I actually did a Thanksgiving one and found it challenging, frustrating and oddly satisfying. Meanwhile, this was a great - relatively brief - treat!
Author's Response:
Sexy, angry, fed-up Jim indeed - just how we like him. :o)
I hadn't intended to explore this further, but I've had several reviews/comments suggesting that I should - so I probably will. You know I have a hard time just shutting the hell up anyway. :o)
Wait, you wrote something new? How'd that slip past me? Even in my craziest times, I always stop and read what you write - I'll have to check it out!
10 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 05:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Damn. I LOVE this. I love that last line by Jim.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Yeah, I'm ready for him to say that to her. :o)