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Reviewer: girl7 Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: December 12, 2006 05:19 pm Title: There's Someone Else

Ahh, GreenFish, this just gets better with every chapter!  You've actually put a little tarnish on this episode for me - because why, why, why did they not utilize the opportunity to have Pam make the "someone else" comment, then cut to Jim's reaction??  Arggghhh, so perfect!

And I'm ending this review right now, because I peeked at the chapter five title, and I gave a little inward squee.



Author's Response: It's funny because when I was fleshing out this story in my head, I came up with the "idea" for each chapter and then had to write down the chapter names so I could remember where I was going with the story, and I kind of went from there.  "There's someone else," was one of my initial thoughts and, of course, in the world of The Office, how almost everything has sort of a double-meaning.  I often wish I could write more visually because it's easy for me to come up with dialogue, and it's easy for me to see how it would play out onscreen, but trying to put that picture in words is so difficult sometimes.  Agh.

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