Reviews For Straight Lines
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 
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Date: January 03, 2007 06:58 am Title: The Date
8 [Report This]Date: January 03, 2007 06:58 am Title: The Date
Some really nice parallels in these! Nice way to show that, as close as they were before, and as intimate the confession, they feel a bit like strangers now.
Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 04:57 am Title: The Date
Date: January 03, 2007 04:57 am Title: The Date
Reading this, I can just see the look on Jim's face during The Convention, when hears Michael mention Pam's date on the phone...like his third rejection (because if she's already dating, and still not contacting him...) This really captures that painful moment.
Author's Response: Funny, I never thought about it that way...so true, though. I always hate Michael for saying that to her on the phone. You'd think of all people, he'd know...